A Friend in Darkness [Wannabe Poem]

[wicked]

AN: Stuntcat inspired me to post this with her poem. This little piece isn't much of anything and could probably be redone better...by someone else I'm sure. However, this was my first attempt at poetry and while it isn't fiction it's original. I like the ending best.

A Friend in Darkness
by Wicked Child

The morning comes
Chasing my friend away
I am left alone
And I sit here waiting
Waiting for something
Something that will never come
And I continue to wonder why
But as before, I realize
I realize the reason is me

The sun descends behind mountains
With it goes my pride
As the black of night rises
I withdraw deeper inside
Like many a time before
I have an infinite friend
A friend in darkness

[Melville's Best Friend]

This was beautiful, Queen of the KTBC.

Really well written. I shall have to ask that you NOT think this is a wannabe poem. *glares*

I liked the ending the best, too.

Well done!!! ^_^


Blast all of you people who are able to write poetry!!!!! I envy you all!!!!

[WhiteWindRRose]

nicely done.
computer must've made an err there... putting wanabe... gotta get that checked!
hope u try the "poetry thang" again.
sounds like ur a natural

[wicked]

Thanks you two. But I don't feel like I'm a natural and I'm sure if some long dead famous poet read this he or she would die laughing.

Actually I was thinking of using this for an original piece of fiction but haven't decided yet.

This little thing is a real reflection of me.

Thanks for the support. ^_^

~Wicked

[WhiteWindRRose]

it's no prob. though i disagree! aren't the long dead poets too dead to laugh anyway? i wouldn't trust some smiling corpse... but it's up to u i suppose...