[Lemon] Loco Lacrimae 1/1
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This...this.....this, this...this, this, *this*....
um...can't...really type coherently....struck dumb with too much...of *this*....
There are two reasons why I'm never going to forget this story. The first is readily apparent: your talent. I don't think I read a word of your story; I sensed it, touched it, felt it, lived it. Each word was deliberate and enthralling, drawing me in until I couldn't tell the difference between words on a screen and rain on my face. This story, without any prior experience of the characters or the series, is so well written that its glorified with its own merit. I'm stunned with feeling, and it's exquisite.
The second reason is much more...embarrassing, but I feel the need to vent, so...yeah. Randomly, I must say that you did an excellent, albeit highly unintentional job of bridging two of my favorite fandoms together with my lunch-break-related daydreams. You see, there is this particular epic-y fanfiction I just recently finished in the Inuyasha universe that had me fantasizing about other fandoms, particularly GW and 1xR (in a crossover, reincarnation sense...yeah, I'm a certified geek). Without going into too much detail, there were scenes in your story that were eerie in how well they mirrored events in the IY fanfiction that I have since mentally bronzed and placed upon the 'inside-my-head' shelf of unforgettable literature. Needless to say, you have insurmountably satisfied my desire to see the GW universe, and the 1xR pairing, as a continuation of the IY story. So, unintentionally, thank you so much it *hurts*.
*Whew*...well, I would say more, but it's hard to type a plethora of emotion adequately enough to get my point across. This fic seriously is pretty much a daydream come true. You are so talented it blinds me, and I hope to read more of your work very soon. You, and your story, are amazing.
~ice *dumbfounded and lovin' it* princess
um...can't...really type coherently....struck dumb with too much...of *this*....
There are two reasons why I'm never going to forget this story. The first is readily apparent: your talent. I don't think I read a word of your story; I sensed it, touched it, felt it, lived it. Each word was deliberate and enthralling, drawing me in until I couldn't tell the difference between words on a screen and rain on my face. This story, without any prior experience of the characters or the series, is so well written that its glorified with its own merit. I'm stunned with feeling, and it's exquisite.
The second reason is much more...embarrassing, but I feel the need to vent, so...yeah. Randomly, I must say that you did an excellent, albeit highly unintentional job of bridging two of my favorite fandoms together with my lunch-break-related daydreams. You see, there is this particular epic-y fanfiction I just recently finished in the Inuyasha universe that had me fantasizing about other fandoms, particularly GW and 1xR (in a crossover, reincarnation sense...yeah, I'm a certified geek). Without going into too much detail, there were scenes in your story that were eerie in how well they mirrored events in the IY fanfiction that I have since mentally bronzed and placed upon the 'inside-my-head' shelf of unforgettable literature. Needless to say, you have insurmountably satisfied my desire to see the GW universe, and the 1xR pairing, as a continuation of the IY story. So, unintentionally, thank you so much it *hurts*.
*Whew*...well, I would say more, but it's hard to type a plethora of emotion adequately enough to get my point across. This fic seriously is pretty much a daydream come true. You are so talented it blinds me, and I hope to read more of your work very soon. You, and your story, are amazing.
~ice *dumbfounded and lovin' it* princess
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Kainen wrote:I adore the conversation between Relena and Heero.
Good stuff.
Good lemon.
Great fic!!!
More!!

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it.
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I love it when Heero addresses his past. It's such an interesting one, and it effects him more deeply than I think he or the people around him really want to admit.Raspberry wrote:Ah, I must agree. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G would be an offending word to desribe this fic, but I haven't known a stronger one, yetI am really in awe for this story, as it showed the whole relationship of Heero's and Relena's, and FINALLY somebody has made Heero to talk about his past, but doing it on his own free will. Really.
Wheeeeeeeee, thanks for commenting and saying such nice things! (I always perk up when I see a reply notification with your name in it. You've got me trained!

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Well, at least I managed a to make a memorable first impression.ice princess wrote:This...this.....this, this...this, this, *this*....
um...can't...really type coherently....struck dumb with too much...of *this*....
~ice *dumbfounded and lovin' it* princess


Thank you for all of your wonderful comments. I'm very glad you enjoyed Loco Lacrimae. (It's one of my favorites that I have written too. Not all of my stuff is this good though. Really.)
Would you mind telling me what IY fic it reminded you of? I'm not totally unfamiliar with the fandom. I've just been neglecting it for about a year now and have no idea who's writing what.
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Hi! Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed Loco Lacrimae. This fic is just a oneshot though so this is all there is and there won't be a next chapter. I'm not really working on any chaptered GW fics at the moment, but you can read my other oneshots and my completed chaptered fics atStephy wrote:u should continue dis fic soon.....i'm dying to read the next chap
http://blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/viewforum.php?f=61
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If this was only the second lemon you've ever read, it's a bit early to be declaring me your official favorite writer.GundamVixen wrote:You're officially my favorite Writer!!!
Ok, this was beautiful! I love the characterizations; they match them completely! this one shot is beautiful! your writing is brilliant!
this was actually my second lemon I have ever read in my life

Goodness, I haven't seen you around in a long time! Of course, I haven't really been around in a long time either. I'm glad you liked it!Lady Saffir wrote:*sigh* This was absolutely beautiful. And I love the image of Heero carrying Relena piggy-back.