[Lemon] Loco Lacrimae 1/1

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This...this.....this, this...this, this, *this*....

um...can't...really type coherently....struck dumb with too much...of *this*....

There are two reasons why I'm never going to forget this story. The first is readily apparent: your talent. I don't think I read a word of your story; I sensed it, touched it, felt it, lived it. Each word was deliberate and enthralling, drawing me in until I couldn't tell the difference between words on a screen and rain on my face. This story, without any prior experience of the characters or the series, is so well written that its glorified with its own merit. I'm stunned with feeling, and it's exquisite.

The second reason is much more...embarrassing, but I feel the need to vent, so...yeah. Randomly, I must say that you did an excellent, albeit highly unintentional job of bridging two of my favorite fandoms together with my lunch-break-related daydreams. You see, there is this particular epic-y fanfiction I just recently finished in the Inuyasha universe that had me fantasizing about other fandoms, particularly GW and 1xR (in a crossover, reincarnation sense...yeah, I'm a certified geek). Without going into too much detail, there were scenes in your story that were eerie in how well they mirrored events in the IY fanfiction that I have since mentally bronzed and placed upon the 'inside-my-head' shelf of unforgettable literature. Needless to say, you have insurmountably satisfied my desire to see the GW universe, and the 1xR pairing, as a continuation of the IY story. So, unintentionally, thank you so much it *hurts*.

*Whew*...well, I would say more, but it's hard to type a plethora of emotion adequately enough to get my point across. This fic seriously is pretty much a daydream come true. You are so talented it blinds me, and I hope to read more of your work very soon. You, and your story, are amazing.

~ice *dumbfounded and lovin' it* princess

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star fighter wrote:Beautiful. Heero's confession that he would cry for Relena almost made me cry with joy. Thanks for this wonderful fic. Your stories always make me so happy
Thanks you for your kind comments! I'm glad you liked it! (And my other stories too! Thank you again!)
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Kainen wrote:I adore the conversation between Relena and Heero.
Good stuff.
Good lemon.
Great fic!!!
More!!
:lol: You're all soooo greedy, wanting more smut! We'll have to wait and see what develops in my twisted little head. I doubt that there will be a direct sequel to this, but I do have a few other lemony ideas to play with over the summer.

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked it.
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Raspberry wrote:Ah, I must agree. A-M-A-Z-I-N-G would be an offending word to desribe this fic, but I haven't known a stronger one, yet :D I am really in awe for this story, as it showed the whole relationship of Heero's and Relena's, and FINALLY somebody has made Heero to talk about his past, but doing it on his own free will. Really.
I love it when Heero addresses his past. It's such an interesting one, and it effects him more deeply than I think he or the people around him really want to admit.

Wheeeeeeeee, thanks for commenting and saying such nice things! (I always perk up when I see a reply notification with your name in it. You've got me trained! :lol:)
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ice princess wrote:This...this.....this, this...this, this, *this*....

um...can't...really type coherently....struck dumb with too much...of *this*....

~ice *dumbfounded and lovin' it* princess
Well, at least I managed a to make a memorable first impression. :lol: I think you managed to type quite coherently. Eloquently even. :wink:

Thank you for all of your wonderful comments. I'm very glad you enjoyed Loco Lacrimae. (It's one of my favorites that I have written too. Not all of my stuff is this good though. Really.)

Would you mind telling me what IY fic it reminded you of? I'm not totally unfamiliar with the fandom. I've just been neglecting it for about a year now and have no idea who's writing what.
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Post by Stephy »

u should continue dis fic soon.....i'm dying to read the next chap :razz: :-P

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Stephy wrote:u should continue dis fic soon.....i'm dying to read the next chap
Hi! Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed Loco Lacrimae. This fic is just a oneshot though so this is all there is and there won't be a next chapter. I'm not really working on any chaptered GW fics at the moment, but you can read my other oneshots and my completed chaptered fics at
http://blissfulignorance.com/phpBB/viewforum.php?f=61
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Post by GundamVixen »

MY GOD!!

You're officially my favorite Writer!!! :D

Ok, this was beautiful! I love the characterizations; they match them completely! this one shot is beautiful! your writing is brilliant!

this was actually my second lemon I have ever read in my life :)

Keep writing more!

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Post by Lady Saffir »

*sigh* This was absolutely beautiful. And I love the image of Heero carrying Relena piggy-back. :)

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GundamVixen wrote:You're officially my favorite Writer!!!

Ok, this was beautiful! I love the characterizations; they match them completely! this one shot is beautiful! your writing is brilliant!

this was actually my second lemon I have ever read in my life
If this was only the second lemon you've ever read, it's a bit early to be declaring me your official favorite writer. :lol: There are people who do lemons specifically and writing in general much better than I do. The sentiment is quite flattering though, and I thank you for it!
Lady Saffir wrote:*sigh* This was absolutely beautiful. And I love the image of Heero carrying Relena piggy-back.
Goodness, I haven't seen you around in a long time! Of course, I haven't really been around in a long time either. I'm glad you liked it!
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