Interjacence review

[Akashamoon]

Wow! This was a great story. Great use of words, and great job keeping everyone in character. To sum it up, great job writting the whole story. The story was filled with funny times, sweet times, serious times, and "I'm being a jerk" times. The title was different, but I guess that gives you an interesting title award:) The problem is that you can't have an ending like that. I want to know what is going to happen. I'm waiting for your next chapter.
Again, great job.

-Akasha