Missing by a Mile - Chapter 26

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Miss_Korea wrote::eek:

*cackles* Oh. My. God. *hugs Rose* I love you, have I told you that? There are no words that can justify my love for this story. Keep it up, girl.
*hugs back* I'm trying to keep it up. When the story gets difficult, it's a little hard to make myself work on it. But I'm still trying. :)
Silly, silly Heero. Just what are we going to do with you? And that sly, Trowa. It just makes his sex appeal go up. Oh what I wouldn't do to have just five minutes with that....
Trowa: O_O

*giggles* My my...well, we know where your brain is. :D

Thanks so much for reading, Miss Korea!

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Rose

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Adaon wrote: This isn't said enough, You rock Rose
*glomps Adaon* Thanks, so much, Adaon. Although I think you're too kind to me sometimes. (but, I'll take it anyway)
Wingnut wrote: Oh this is indeed wonderful Rose. We shall alternately title this chapter "Where pilots get slammed into walls and Heero gets yet more grief about weither or not he got laid last night with Relena." Or "Pre-wedding Parinoia" for short.
*giggles* I like that title. I like it alot. :D Thanks, Wingnut! :D

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Piper wrote: Ooooh the double entendres!! ^_^ That was nice.
:bounce: Who? Me? Double entendre? Well, ok, you caught me. But only a little bit... :D
LilTrix wrote: But it seems Heero will never get a break--poor thing
It does seem that way, doesn't it? And in all fairness, I never intended for him to really get one.

Heero: That's why I hate you.
Rose: I can change my mind....
Heero: Or I can change it for you.
Rose: O_O;; Eep!

*hugs Piper and LilTrix* Thanks so much for reading!!! :)

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Beer-monster wrote:An update so soon!!!

*satan and all his little wizards stare in bemusement at the flakes of cold white that float from the fiery skies*
*brandishes Deathscythe's heat-scythe*

Oh, it's a scythe!
Anyway, great chapter full of humour, a little waff and of course the clown getting smacked around a bit, always a pius :D
Trowa: I still maintain that Heero deserves the smacking more than I do.
Heero: You're the only one that feels that way.
Zechs: I second Yuy's statement.
Duo: And I third it.
Trowa: You can't 'third' anything, Duo.
Heero: No, he was calling third place in line to deliver your smacking.
Trowa: -___-;;;
Though this chapter does seem even shorter than the last. I think you are using some trick to make 7000 words seem short, you evil, cruel...
This chapter was originally 7000+ words; I chopped it to be about even with the last one. :P
:-? What am I doing, she'll take that as a compliment :-?
Indeed, I do! *bows*
Anyway great chapter, loved some of the metaphors you used especially in the flashback. bring on the next one :D :salute:
Trying! I have it all rough drafted; I had to go to a job interview in California and have had a pretty tough deadline at work + a case study due (I turned it in tonight), so that only leaves me 2 days to edit chapter 26.5/27, but hopefully, I can get it done. Or, if not by Saturday, by Sunday at the latest. Blah! Who came up with this crummy schedule? Oh, that would be me...

*hugs* Thanks for reading, Beery! :)

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melrose_stormhaven wrote: Do my eyes decieve me, or do I see a missing by a mile update?
I'm trying to be good! Really, I am. I'm even rough drafting chapter 33 at the, well, not at THE moment, but several days each week...
What the hell, I love you, Rose. Really. I was laughing as I read this fanfiction...and I'am almost drooling with anticipation for the next chapter...XD
*HUGS* Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it, and the next chapter is due really soon. *eyes chapter*

Chapter: *stares back*
Rose: Haven't you edited yourself yet?
Chapter: Nope. In fact, I'm regressing as we speak.
Rose: *WHINES*

Thanks sweetie! :)

Love,
Rose

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Tobo Castit wrote: What I would give for a teaspoon of your talent... I'd surrender my DVD collection, and it's pretty expansive. You're one of the best Heero/Relena fic writers out there, as well as the first good fanfiction writer I read back when I was getting into this stuff.
:oops: Thank you. Very much. You're very very kind. *hugs*
Excellent chapter, and so fast! I especially laughed when Heero was getting uncomfortable as Relena's nightgown misbehaved...
It's funny how different things get picked out by different people. I kind of added those bits in during the rewrite (editing session). As for the speed, I at least WAS making myself get up and write every day; I'm trying to keep to it, but some days are easier than others.

Thank you so much for reading, and for the very kind review. :)

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Eden wrote: *Dies laughing*

This was exactly what I needed to see today ^^ This chapter was incredibly entertaining, what with the mysterious re-aranging of Relena's schedual and all. :wink: Hurray for the mini-plot!
A lot of people are blaming Trowa for the scheduling deal. I went back and checked, though, the part of the plot I was referring to was introduced in chapter 18. ^___^
And such a speedy update! It's making me want to try your new writing schedual myself :-P Imagine the things I could accomplish, . . . :-P
Oh, good. I don't suppose you live in the Central time zone. I was thinking maybe you could call and make sure I'm up. Or, vice versa. It helps me to make a promise to someone else, sometimes...
I can't wait to see what else you have in store for Heero, his life just seems to get more and more complicated as time passes ^^
Heero: You noticed this, too?
Rose: Stop whining.
Heero: I. Do. Not. Whine. That's reserved for that idiot, Maxwell.
Duo: *whines* But, Heero, how can you say that about me, buddy?
Rose: I wonder...

*hugs Eden* Thanks so much for reading!!!

Love,
Rose

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FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol: :lol: I WAS ABLE TO FIND CHAPTER 26!!!!!!!!!!!!! :razz: :razz: :razz: :razz: :D :D :D :D
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