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Terrible Tuesday?

Post by dragonlady9 »

OK, don't take this seriously, I am now venting and I TRUST all of you to protect this poem that I wrote Feb. 14 of this year...


For all who know me, I apologize for this day.

My inner child needed me this whole day of love.

No one came for her, but I.

She needed to cry, not only for herself, but everyone else.

He is back, she whispered to me.

I?m scared, I am lost, and I don?t know what to do?

He is my friend, this Uncle that I love, but he hurts me so?

I was sailing so far, with only a star as my warning before a big storm came a mourning!

Pull me out; Pull me out, she cried.

I am drowning, my ship is gone and the waves are long.

I can?t breathe, she wheezed.

The tears came then, so I reached for her in pen.

Hush my child, do not you dare cry on this beautiful, love filled day, fore I am your land, stable all the way.

Can you not feel the sun, I screamed from above them.

Reach! NOW! I shall tow, ROW!

Forget that blasted star, it will ALWAYS be there. Lor! Don?t be such a bore!

Swim home, beautiful! Be a bird, a mermaid, or be your OWN star!

Come back NOW, he loves, but cannot hurt you, lovely.

I wept dovely, for lovely was a laugh and a half.

You are absolutely right, she whispered bath.

To bathe is fine, but land is whine, fine wine.

Must I, must I talk, talk to him?

YES, that is best even if you must go West, however, North is less.

Come back?

Yes?


:D Now, all have a marvolous day!!! :lol:
Last edited by dragonlady9 on Wed Feb 22, 2006 9:28 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post by lildragonfly »

could you put spaces between the sentences...

it's kinda hard to read it...

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Post by dragonlady9 »

:D Thanky so much, lildragonfly for bringing that to my attention! Wouldn't have ever thought about the spacing thing since I know what was written. Also, for anyone else how previews, can I please get some feedback?! 8) Let me know if you liked or disliked my poem. I know that it is kind of an emotional one, but would still luv to know, pretty please with a cherry on top...maybe even with some whipped cream too...that would be really cool... :wink:

:lol: Write ya later...
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:cry: no replies... must not like the poem... oh well, at least others do...
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Post by Morrighan »

It's in the wrong section. Poetry goes into the Original Forum.

Aside from the minor glitch, it's quite good. I'm guessing that most single gals will agree with me when I say that Valentine's Day is one of their least favorite days of the year.
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Post by dragonlady9 »

Morrighan wrote:It's in the wrong section. Poetry goes into the Original Forum.

Aside from the minor glitch, it's quite good. I'm guessing that most single gals will agree with me when I say that Valentine's Day is one of their least favorite days of the year.
:D THANKS! Had NO idea that I posted it in the wrong forum... sighs... always seems to get lost, even if I have the greatest map in the world... always have fun, though! Have a wonderfully, fantastical day Morrighan!
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