The suspense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like the setting you created. Heero you little....suprise, surprise for him in the next chappie!!!
Found the insert of Natalie a bit out of place though. Not enough background info to include her without comprimising fluidity. IMO only!!!! But this in no way distracts from the fab story!!
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