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Why?
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Oh goodness, SOOOoOooOoooOOOOO GOOD! Don't have time to read throught he responses, but I am SO liking this Jackie! You're such a good writer! *noogie* If you don't get an A in this creative writing class we can give your teacher a jellyfish and then..pee on her. Well, figuratively, and stuff.
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LOL!!!
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench. :-P

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I thought you should use vinegar for that. XD
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Alilamba wrote:Oh goodness, SOOOoOooOoooOOOOO GOOD! Don't have time to read throught he responses, but I am SO liking this Jackie! You're such a good writer! *noogie* If you don't get an A in this creative writing class we can give your teacher a jellyfish and then..pee on her. Well, figuratively, and stuff.
^^ Thank you!

Actually, the teacher herself will not be reading it. :-? Which is kind of what worries me. Today is our first Writers Workshop, and I'm using chapters 1 & 1 1/2.

We have to write 3-10 pages (which will eventually be 5-10 pages; I think I'm good there... :lol: ), and then run off 3 copies to distribute amongst our peers. :eek: And then, they take it home and read it. :-? The following week, I recieve the critiques that they wrote for me.... :eek: It's not that I don't trust y'all's judgement, but you guys are in the story, so there's that extra enjoyment in there for you. :wink:

There are, of course, rules on how to and how not to critique. I asked her if she'd ever had a student break the rules repeatively, but she didn't understand the question... :lol: So for my next project, I'll be writing a humorous story about the Evil Critiquer who annonymously tells every person whom he critiques, "You suck! Stop writing! You just lowered the average IQ of the world!" :lol:
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:lol: Go for it! I'm sure your teacher would appreciate that. :D
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:lol: I don't think she'd ever read it... ^^;

There are 30 of us, so she can't possibly hope to read 300 pages a week... :wink:
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Tee hee. Well, it was a thought. :D
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

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Jackie, I'm wondering if you can actually keep it to -just- ten pages... ^_^
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Post by epyon »

Jackie, I'm wondering if you can actually keep it to -just- ten pages... ^_^
10 bucks says she can't
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