Is that better?

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Like I said, you may decide how short is short.wicked wrote:How short are we talking here? Right now my hair is shoulder length (should probably get it cut again to just below my chin because it's easier to dye that way and if I decide to go back blonde I shouldn't have too much orange hair to deal with which is a good thing).Jackie wrote:Except Wicked has a stipulation: sorry, but you've gotta have short hair.Don't care what color or how short is short, but it's gotta be that way... Because........ It just has to be.
I dunno... The second in command best agent person has to have short hair.
And where did the stipulation come from? Your class or just your own author-rule? (I'm not debunking it by any means, I'm honestly curious.)
If you want/need to know any other description from moi lemme know (eye color and whatnot).
I don't think I've used enough parantheses. :-?
~Wicked
P.S. Puppy got that nickname because for one he's a male which automatically makes him a dog and two he's young and horny which means he humps everything in sight.
Caliborn wrote:*Snerking* For Puppy, I was gonna go with a possible combination of hairstyle and attitude, but that works as well, Wicked.![]()
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Well Jackie, you've got mine and Morri's descrip... and your own, obviously. If you don't want to use those I think, at the very least, you should come up with the basics yourself (hair color/style and eye color and height) and then maybe leave it to the readers to figure the rest out on their own. At the very least, it's a writing tactic to avoid having to put "Jackie" or "Cali" or Ali" over and over to explain who's talking or doing what. "said Cali" becomes "said the brown-haired girl", "Ali smiled' becomes "Blue eyes twinkled above a amused smile." (...and actually I have no idea what color Ali's eyes are, but you get the point. ^_^)
But, again, this is -entirely- your story, and I absolutely love how you've written it so far, so you don't have to listen to the silly girl who still hasn't caught up with her sanity. ^_^
Now now, they hadn't used the weapon yet when Wicked was going solo. Nor had the top agent been captured.Caliborn wrote:I know. @.@ It takes -seven- of us to complete a mission Wicked got captured on... and even then, the outlook is grim. I get a bad feeling about this!
wicked wrote:I only got captured because I was staring at Wolfe's ass for too long! It wasn't my fault! Being second in command I don't get out much! Blame hi~im!
~Wicked
LOL! That's my problem when I write; I get caught up in the details at the beginning of the story and then get bord because it takes too long to get into the real action. ^_^Jackie wrote:
Aww!! I wanna get to the later chapters!! -_- Starting off is so slow...
Thinks... I may very well use this... *Marks in head page number*Caliborn wrote:*Snickerfitting* Wicked, -you- should plot with Jackie! That would be just too funny...
I don't know. The Paladin in this story seems to be very calm and suave-- and more than a bit of a flirt. It could easily get on one of the girl's nerves as they're on the mission, and I just randomly pictured a conversation between (any) two of the girls, like...
*Frowns after Agent Paladin as he walks away* "...Puppy."
"What?"
"...He's like a Puppy. That's it."
"*Blink* You're kidding. How in the world does he remind you of a Puppy?"
"Well, he's young and overconfident, kind of like a puppy, the way they'll jump headfirst into anything. And he thinks he's just the most charming thing in the world and he can get away with anything."
"...Okay, yeah, you've got a point. Puppy, huh?"
"Yup. Besides, if we call him that, it's bound to get under his skin."
"*Grins* I like the way you think."