Tohru's Prince (Kyoru, 1/1)

"Once, when I was younger, the kids in my class played a game where they went around assigning everyone the name of a fruit. I asked them 'what should I be?' They laughed and told me 'You can be the rice ball'. Then they started running around chasing each other, playing... Every so often, they'd call out the name of another fruit, and that child would get to join in. But they never called me. I was too dumb to realize...there's no rice ball in a fruits basket."

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That was so cute! Write more......(with fire in the background) I command you! lol I liked what Shigure said as well heheheh, he's such a nut but he's the joker of the show X_X Also, very well in character. Here's an A+++++, just show them to your teachers at school and they'll know it was me ^_~
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I love this fanfiction!! i"ve read it so many times, but i still don't get bored of it~! I'm totally a Kyoru fan, but sometimes Tohru's OOC in some of them (especially the lemony ones) but this one was SO GOOD in their characters. Keep writing!! =)
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I* Crys*have nothing to say! :cry:
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That was so cute!!! I love this story. . . it's so. . . CUTE!! lol
:bounce: K-Y-O-R-U !!! :bounce:
lol, i have so many favorite furuba couples!! but my favorite is easily kyoru.
I also love yuki x machi; hatori x mayu; hiro x kisa; rin x haru; kureno x arisa; and. . . *thinks of one other. . .* that's it. lol.
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Post by kyoru tomboy »

:D KYORUS ROCK!!!!! :D
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! SO KAWAII!!(super cute)
Like the last one here's my fav. couples
KyoxTorhu :bounce: :razz: :D
YukixMachi
RinxHaru
KuerenoxArisa
HiroxKisa
SakixKazuma (there's fanfics about that)
AyamexMine
ShigurexMitt
HatorixMayuko
........that's it! Whew! That was all of em'! (except Akito,Momiji(3rd fav char.), and Kagura who has no couples.) :cry:
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Post by Tobo Castit »

You captured Shigure PERFECTLY! :salute:

That was cute, and it made me smile. Kyo and Tohru aren't my favorite couple (Yuki forever!) But I really enjoyed this, especially because everyone was in character and the situation was completely believeable. The roof is an incredibly appropriate place for them to finally confess their feelings for each other.

Excellently done :salute: I have to agree with WaterGoddess, you wrote this so well I'd love to read others by you!
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