Under the Boardwalk [PG15]
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kawaiiemogirl
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I love it and I can't wait till you write more.
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Caliborn
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Oh no! You can't stop there! I was just starting to get really into the story; I hope you write a sequel. The whole thng was wonderfully written with just the right amount of humor sprinkled thoughout-- my favorite had to be the subtle "Gundammit!" ^_^ Classic.
Heero -does- seem like quite the ass, but he was stressed and upset that she keeps running away, I think. Of course, that doesn't forgive what he said to her, but...
And I was quite shocked that Relena really did run him over. ^_^;
Anyway, great job and here's hopeing for more!
Heero -does- seem like quite the ass, but he was stressed and upset that she keeps running away, I think. Of course, that doesn't forgive what he said to her, but...
And I was quite shocked that Relena really did run him over. ^_^;
Anyway, great job and here's hopeing for more!
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I want to live forever or die in the attempt.
-Annonymous
~Temptress Goddess of Vengeance
~CEO of the Hentai Charity League
"Puppy McPup?"
"For G**sakes, no!"
Andrea is the most beautiful, amazing sister on earth... when she's not being a meanie.
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Andrea
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Yay! She ran him over! He deserved it after all the stupid and cruel things he said. I liked your writing style, it was very fluid and easy to read. I enjoyed the simplicity of your language, how your descriptions were sweet and smooth; not the usual deepness and mind wreaking adjectives that confuses and bores me half to death.
The point is that I loved it. It was humorous and romantic and it made me go GRR on some parts, and for that, I kudo you. ^_________^;
Lovely!
The point is that I loved it. It was humorous and romantic and it made me go GRR on some parts, and for that, I kudo you. ^_________^;
Lovely!
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GundamVixen
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LMAO!!!
I got that was totally orginal!!
Good job!!
I especially loved the part
Heero released her. Relena almost dropped her drink. Then she considered pouring it over herself to cool down.
?I want you?? Heero growled, voice low and menacing.
?Yes.? She replied breathlessly.
?To put on more clothing.? He finished.
Brilliant!!
I got that was totally orginal!!
Good job!!
I especially loved the part
Heero released her. Relena almost dropped her drink. Then she considered pouring it over herself to cool down.
?I want you?? Heero growled, voice low and menacing.
?Yes.? She replied breathlessly.
?To put on more clothing.? He finished.
Brilliant!!
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RelenaDorlinYuy1
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