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Sissi · Post by **Sissi** » Sat May 03, 2003 1:31 pm

Wow. OMG. Trowa was the one who killed Heero after all. You have really surprised me here, but oddly enough, I liked this fic. This 'little' twist of yours was very interesting. And the last sentence, where Trowa said that it was worth losing his soul to have Relena left me breathless and with wide eyes. Just hope that Relena will never find out Trowa's secret or else...

Wocked, I totally agree with you!! This poem fits this story perfectly!! Cheers for 3xR stories!!! Yay!! Not that I don't like 1xR fics, though ^^

Hoping to see more works from you.

Symee-Sama · Post by **Symee-Sama** » Sat May 03, 2003 6:38 pm

ARGH! Trowa I could kill you!!!!! That was incredibly low! Killing poor Heero because he had the girl you liked, and then going out with his girl.... Oh man, you're lucky that you're cute.

Anyway, just like everyone else, I totally wasn't expecting that, and the story is really good. Write more!

Symee

lilac310 · Post by **lilac310** » Sun May 04, 2003 7:32 pm

OMG!

I'm speechless....I have lots of things to say in my head about what you wrote but I just can't seem to form the right words. I never expected that Trowa would be the one to kill Heero.....NOOOO!!!!!!....I do like Heero and Trowa and I so especially like the twist you put in your story...This is wonderful!

OH..poor Heero....Anyways...I really LOVE your story....whether you believe it or not, there's still that angsty and tingly feeling in me after reading your fic....This is so incredible!!!

Yawning! · Post by **Yawning!** » Mon May 05, 2003 6:51 pm

I've been reading a lot of Trowa/Relena fanfics and Heero is in one way or another out of the picture. This is the first one one were Heero was killed by a friend. I sort of like the twist. I hope you do more with this pairing.

Kelly_Pure · Post by **Kelly_Pure** » Mon May 12, 2003 12:07 pm

Kind of distrubing but in a nice way. I never expected Trowa to be the one. Which is kind of good since the ending was unexpected. Nice.

Kelly_Pure · Post by **Kelly_Pure** » Mon May 12, 2003 12:08 pm

Kind of distrubing but in a nice way. I never expected Trowa to be the one. Which is kind of good since the ending was unexpected. Nice.

tornin1/2 · Post by **tornin1/2** » Tue May 13, 2003 5:51 am

that was COMPLETELY!!!! unexpected.
who would have thought, Trowa would do such a thing.
I had my comment all planned out before i got to the end:

that was a great story and i liked the way the relationship moved quite realisticly in the sense that it wasn't rushed, (like i do with some of my fics).

But Woah! i'm speechless!
torn

Beck · Post by **Beck** » Tue May 13, 2003 11:32 pm

I really liked the way you had this set up. Hard to believe that Trowa would've been the one to do it but its all in the suspense. Near the end while he was thinking about what he did, the whole time I kept saying "he's a psycho" as if to rid the obstical that was in his way to Relena. Great fic though!

tornin1/2 · Post by **tornin1/2** » Wed May 14, 2003 8:42 am

will Relena ever find out the truth?

lexcel · Post by **lexcel** » Wed May 14, 2003 9:11 am

Okay, I'll say...THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU for all the nice reviews. I didn't think Trowa doing Heero in would get such a repsonse. There is a sequel planned. Trowa might like the results. Hope I don't disappoint.

Blissful Ignorance

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