That was nice and dark. I'm so curious about all the mysteries you opened up in this first chapter. Good going! I'm anxiously awaiting your next update.
Great work Casp!
Especially in the details - I could picture it all happening in my mind like as if it was on TV
Me likes dark & mysteries :razz: Me also likes some of the humour you snuck in.
*hugs* want more!
Aww, dankus. I'm thinking about sending out the second chapter this week. I'm not sure if I should though. Being as its too close to this one...mayhap perhaps?