Blissful Ignorance

"And just like that, the screen went blank, leaving Sally to wonder whether one day, she?d lead a squad of Preventor agents to the Mars Settlement to put out a fire made by Agent Wind."

Interesting phrasing there considering that Noin is preventer Fire. . .

Anyway a little two angsty for me, I ...

Very nice. Like the descriptions and emotions in the beginning a lot. Well written.

Generally I like it, a little too religious for me, but good.

I really like how your story has progressed from an amusing one shot to a plausible meaningful conversation between the lead characters. Good Job.

I like. continue

I'm kind of undecided about this fic. In a way it is morbidly fascinating and in another I'm not sure I want the characters to go through that if you know what I mean specially Duo and Hilde T_T. However it is very well written and certainly interesting, I cant wait to see what comes next and what ...

Separately the 3 pieces are good . . . together their amazing. Great Job.

Wow! I really like this. Love how you worked in Heero's soldier life into it.

oh cute<3

Very nice.