Blissful Ignorance

*Fans self* Hooooo boy... that...scene... I think...right now... I can only say "aaaaahgnnnngggSEXY." Because damn. That was sexy. :D I loved the whole thing of course, but man do you write steamy well.
It's interesting that you should say that. IMO Timeless isn't nearly as explicit as some of my ...

The sexuality in your writing is simple and yet completely erotic. I read this chapter over and over and over again, and each time it was only better and I gathered more from it.

Please keep writing! I cannot wait to see the rest of this, I know it will be an awesome read as your earlier work has ...

My goodness, so there IS life still here on this website. For weeks I was getting worried, I didn't see any new posts or anything of the sort, or perhaps I was missing something. This sounds quite interesting, I may have to look more into it. Thank you for sharing it .

It's funny, typically I would picture Heero and Relena with two or maybe, MAYBE, three children. But for them to have more than anyone else was so endearing to see, and for me was just an extension of their love for each other. Poor Heero, though lol, surrounded by all of those ladies. But I'm sure ...

melrose_stormhaven wrote:Hi!

I will continue this, but I'll be using a new title for this, which is Crimson Drowning.

So don't worry!

Ah....and there is joy is to the world!
Can't wait to see more!

You should really continue this. This is part of the reason I hate short stories, I always want to know what happens next and you could do so much with this. Please, think about continuing it, even if it's just for yourself for fun .

Hm, can't say I didn't see this one coming. I thought Relena would get pregnant, but the whole "promise to Heero when he goes away again" added to the situation and made it more suspenseful. This chapter seemed shorter than the others, and as much as I liked it (even though you got cold feet :wink ...

Fascinating...I never really thought about how unique a couple Relena and Wufei could be together until I read this. Wufei in some ways is like Heero, but more extroverted and he actually talks. I really like this story. Even though it's a one-shot, I'd love to see where this all leads. It's ...

Wow....I love this story so much. It's sad, true, but very deep and meaningful.

Hmm....part of this lemon was a lot alike of your other story called Relena/My Heero. Same phrases and actions, but it was still good .