Blissful Ignorance

Wow, that's cute! Great one-shot.

Nice style. You used some wonderful imagery. I especially like the parallels of them dancing and how they co-exist. Lovely.

Aww, how marvellous! I feel all warm inside, what a good ending.

Awesome! Heck, I'd even let him drive. Provided he promised not to crash or anything involving explosions or plummeting over cliffs. Great stuff!

This is dismal, but it's still very good, and now I'm intrigued. Do continue please.

That was a pretty piece of citrus, and I too am going to go read the rest of this story...

I giggle at the name Jeopold...

Seems to be progressing very nicely, at a little speedy pace perhaps? Will it continue this way, or maybe slow down a bit?

Like it very much, more please!

Oooh, someone bested Sousuke's combat skills? This is interesting, I can't wait to see where it's going...

I think there should be a special nozzle attachment for computer monitors that will douse readers with a nice spray of ice water after they're done reading fics like this...

That was hawt...and I never use that word, that's how hawt it was.

:o

That was definately...well, my mouth sure is dry...water! Need water!

Ahem, that was truely naughty, oh so very naughty. Love it!

And those corsets are very pretty, but damn, they look painful...