Blissful Ignorance

I enjoyed reading this story. I too thought it was realistic; that's why I think you DON'T need to continue it. You took a very common issue and magnified an exact moment, an instance, that I'm sure every busy couple goes through when an event like that pops up. Great job.

What an awesome story! I honestly got teary eyed when Ayame said:?I?m going to change the way people think and one day they?ll call you a hero.? What a great, loveable character.

Let's see more of these little ladies in the future!

I can tell already...you are an excellent writer and this will be a awesome story. You are so in-depth with the characterizations of Cathy. She is often written on, but rarely written about--if that makes any sense

Please continue...

Okay...I'll admit it...I got a little teary eyed--OK I got REALLY teary eyed reading Relena's letter to Heero. Her words were very honest and well thought out, but at the same time they held some really powerful and raw emotions.

I hope they make up soon 'cause now I'm all sad!

I was holding my breath for so long I got lightheaded!! What is Relena doing?!

I had to calm myself down cause I'm at work and I'm supposed to be working(duh!)-- and reading this story I almost blew my cover because I was wanted to scream! Damn good writing Rose--I can't wait for the next chapter.

You're gonna continue right?

Yeah, for a moment there I really wanted to pick up a bat and knock the shit out of Heero. Damn good writing, girl. I hope you write more; this seems far from over.

Maybe, it's worth a try The friends that I do have think that I don't trust them, so maybe it's time I do open up. Thanks for listening--or reading in this case

I try to open up to others but I still have this fear...

Okay, so this happened a long time ago. When I was in 7th grade two girls who I thought were my best friends started horrible rumors about me all because I was spending more time with another friend instead of with them. Yeah, dumb-ass reason, I know. Well anywho these girls followed me home and one ...