Blissful Ignorance

Yeah I really like the song the Passenger, I didn't know that Maynard was on it too. I liked the song Passive, I haven't heard any of their other new stuff.

APerfectSoldier87 wrote:You new Girl, do you like A Perfect Circle and Tool?

::Looks around:: me? I love APC and Tool, Maynard has one of the sexiest voices I've ever heard. It's a little androgenous (if I spelled it wrong sorry, too lazy for spell check), but in a cool way.

It's all so cute cute cute. The chicken thing was too funny. Post the next chapter soon please!

Wow, your story is really good... but really sad. Please oh please add some happy moments with Heero and Relena. It was odd seeing Quatre as this violent man, but the way you write it it's very beleivable. I really hope that you finish this story (I hate unfinished stories, especially ones as good ...

In what room? Paper or computer?

I usually do it in my room. Mostly on a computer, but sometimes on paper. The ones on paper usually are more thought out and are ideas late at night I usually write in my bedroom on my bed before I go to sleep in a notebook. By the time I'm ready to sleep I usually ...

Wow, I absolutely love this story. You left a bit of a cliffhanger I hope the next chapter is put up soon. I'm very anxious to find out who Relena winds up with.

The_Braided_Baka's_Onna wrote:Hiya!! Welcome newcomer!

Ya like Tokyopop, huh? Have ya read Crescent Moon? I luvs that story!!

Nopies, I haven't read Crescent Moon. Have you read Snow Drop or Model ::points:: Those are my two latest obsessions.

Paragraphs. Don't mix two characters thoughts in one paragraph.

<i>She was having fun at the park. The beautiful day made her
remember those moments she had spent with her family, those
blissful days when she was just a kid, and her greatest dilemma had
been to chose something to wear. Now ...

Hmm... I've been having some difficulty going from one scene to the next or from one character's prospective to another's smoothly. Does anybody have any suggestions or tips I can use while writing?

::Clears throat:: Greetings citizens of Blissful Ignorance, my name is Dana and I've come to take over this site ::spots black rose and hides napalm under seat:: -hehe- I've stopped by here a couple of times and was impressed with the selection of fanfiction here after my brain has been turned to ...