Blissful Ignorance

oooh! Is It Kikyo? It seems to malevolent to be kagome... KEEP WRITING! Please!

And I love your avatar, I love Zanza from Rurouni Kenshin. I've only just begun on it, but he's a cool guy. Thas all!!

WOOHOO. Well done there. I like the way you laid this down, and the way you had them handle it.

The way I had planned it was more of the platonic, "I'll help you get yourself together, and you help me by staying alive." He loves her, but he loved Kikyo first. He can't truly give his heart to Kagome because she wasn't the first. I don't know if I can explain it really, but it is more of a ...

I look at this and think, omg, what was I thinking? But I also think, hey, this is good... I don't own InuYasha. (No, that isn't good, the story is though!)


She was informed of a familiar presence that she and the Goshinboku were no longer alone. He had come. But the leaves, the ground, her heart ...

That was so funny! I loved it and now am laughing so hard it hurts!!

Soooo confused. This feels more like I'm drifting in a dreamworld than in a story. There seems to be nothing of a tangible feeling, just a bunch of random pieces of information. I like it, I think... @_@*

Oh, she's gonna get angry soon... Her Ji-chan and her mate acting all secretive, I'd be worried too!

Thank you! I am happy that pople like my stuff. Happiness abounds!!

Yeah, I'm new, but not to the whole fanfiction thing. This is my first posted InuYasha fic (I write 'em and forget 'em). But this is one of my favorites, and it isn't fully typed from the atrocious hand-written copy. But I'd love some feedback, so yeah... This is a strange ficclet here, I never ...