Oo, you girls, I'm sooooo loving this!! It's incredible! You three work so good together, and Melrose that last part was just priceless. Now, if I could just get my busy cousin to update, that would be great...
Oo, sexy! My favorite part, I'll have to say is, well, aside from that great lemon, my favorite part is that final line. It was incredibly sweet. One step beyond perfect... /melting heart/
Hey silly! Hey, I can't believe you wrote this while I was away! But its so lovely. It's the happiest story you've ever written, you know? I loved the dialogues!! They were very sexy and sultry. Everything was very romantic.