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It?s a hard choice to make chapter 6/? PG-13

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:02 pm
by darky
Hello, again. I just finish writing a chapter, and I start getting so much ideas for the next chapter. Then I have to start writing so I don?t forget. Anyway, another chapter finished. Enjoy!

Disclaimer: Don?t own Gundam Wing.


It?s a hard choice to make
CHAPTER 6


After a long time of waiting, Relena finally heard voices approaching. She had untied her hands with a piece of glass and she was now behind the door ready to escape, and attack if necessary. After all, technically she was no longer a pacifist. And she was pissed off. She finally had a break to forget about her job, and they come and take that away.

They finally came inside the room and they left the door open. After they were all in she quickly exited the room and closed the door behind her. She quickly went downstairs and ran to the front door, but it was locked. She could hear them coming. She searched for another exit, and then, she saw it. They left a gun in the coffe table.

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They had been searching the entire apartment for hours, and they still had no clue of who took her. Milliardo wasn?t back yet, so they could only hope he found something. Heero was very frustrated about the whole situation. Trowa was feeling the same, but he was mostly confused about Heero. On two ocassions, Trowa tried to enter Relena?s bedroom in order to investigate, but Heero wouldn?t let him. He was so weird sometimes.

Heero was thinking on how he would react when he saw Relena. When he heard Dorothy explain everything he was very mad. He was angry at Relena for tricking everybody. But now, he was actually ashamed of himself for not noticing it. He had to admit that his ego was hurt. She escaped so easily.

But, at the end, she did wrong to act like that. That action led her to this situation. She had some explaining to do. All of the sudden the ?bunny? came to his mind. She would have to explain that, too.

Milliardo finally came back. He had a grin on his face. He was succesful.

? I found the bakery. His name is Nick Taylor. His house is a few blocks away.?

? Let?s go?, said Trowa as they were all heading to the door.

They were about to touch the doorknob when it moved. They heard someone on the other side. They qiuckly had their guns in hand and stepped away from the door. When it opened, they met a startled Relena.

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I know, I know. Very short. But if I kept going, I wouldn?t have the opportunity to leave you once again with a cliff hanger. But don?t worry, I?m almost finished with the next chapter, I just need to check the grammar and some details. It will be done today, I promise.

Please give me your comments. It helps a lot.

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:30 pm
by aertikka1984
Ok, I"m a little disappointed, I was expecting more of a struggle, more something, but its still good anyways, and I can't wait for more. Keep it up!!!

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:35 pm
by darky
Yeah, I know, but it all will be explained on the next chapter, I promise. And I also promise to post very soon.

In fact, I?ll make a bet with myself.

If I don?t post the next chapter in one hour, I will never leave you readers in a cliff hanger again.

Ha, I love a good challenge. :allright:

Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 11:53 pm
by amulak
lol, that's great how she literally walked away from her captors, but oh is she going to be angry at Dorothy for blowing her cover... <_<;;;
Anyhoo- I appreciate the update, even if it's a short chapter : D