Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 4
Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 3:04 pm
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Yay!Heero's and Relenas scene is to die for!
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Shots Fired - Part I - Chapter 4
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Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 3:45 pm
Viscotti has a friend! Yay!
Heero's and Relenas scene is to die for!
Yay!Heero's and Relenas scene is to die for!
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:38 pm
Hm... HiFreak, you're very perceptive. Nice guess... maybe, maybe not? The next couple chapters will tell. Thanks for being a dedicated reader, at any rate. You and Kainen seem to be the only two reading.
At any rate, I actually have a planned ending, but that's for me to know and you all to find out when the time comes. For right now, though, I got a lot of writing ahead of me; I have the whole storyline in my head, but I'm not sure how to implement it. I'm actually planning on letting Viscotti "take five" and probably have him lose focus for a little while. I've noticed I'm giving him a little too much of a spotlight, and will probably let him off for a little bit. This might not happen though, seeing as how hard it will be to find another part of the story to focus on; there's not much else to do so with, considering that he's the main player in the investigation. Tommorow I'll decide, I'm not too sure on that. Anyway, thanks for reading.
At any rate, I actually have a planned ending, but that's for me to know and you all to find out when the time comes. For right now, though, I got a lot of writing ahead of me; I have the whole storyline in my head, but I'm not sure how to implement it. I'm actually planning on letting Viscotti "take five" and probably have him lose focus for a little while. I've noticed I'm giving him a little too much of a spotlight, and will probably let him off for a little bit. This might not happen though, seeing as how hard it will be to find another part of the story to focus on; there's not much else to do so with, considering that he's the main player in the investigation. Tommorow I'll decide, I'm not too sure on that. Anyway, thanks for reading.
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:48 pm
I refuse to be silenced! I detest that you're going to cut me out for a couple chapters! Let me stay, I order you to... or I'll rip my way out of your head and shoot you in the nuts, you mediocre writer! I spit on your shoes, you damned second rate literateur!
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:51 pm
I never gave you permission to speak, lieutenant.
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:54 pm
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I'm... sorry?
I'm... sorry?
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:55 pm
It's okay. Just don't do it again.
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:57 pm
Okay, thanks for not punishing me. See how nice 0mikr0n is?
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 5:17 pm
Sigh...
After reviewing the planned plot, I find it impossible to just cut Viscotti out. He stays.
After reviewing the planned plot, I find it impossible to just cut Viscotti out. He stays.
Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 7:23 pm
HAHA 
Very funny. Poor Viscotti.
Very funny. Poor Viscotti.