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[MormonGirlie]

I want to make a Songfic about heero and Relena. The song is called "If you get there before I do." I want it to take place during the last episode where the chunk of Libra is falling towards earth. Well Listen to the song, and you can basically understand. I'll List the lyrics for you.....
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MormonGirlie

I read a note my grandma wrote back in 1923
Grandpa kept it in his coat and he showed it once to me
He said boy you might not understand
But a long, long time ago
Grandma's daddy didn't like me none
But I love your grandma so

We had this crazy plan to meet
And run away together
Get married in the first town we came to and live forever
But nailed to the tree where we were supposed to meet instead
I found this letter
And this is what it said

If you get there before I do
Don't give up on me
I'll meet you when my chores are through
I don't know how long I'll be
But I'm not gonna let you down
Darling wait and see
And between now and then ‘til I see you again
I'll be loving you, love me

I read those words just hours before my grandma past away
In the door way of a church
Where me and grandpa stopped to pray
I know I'd never seen him cry in all my 15 years
But as he said these words to her
His eyes filled up with tears

If you get there before I do
Don't give up on me
I'll meet you when my chores are through
I don't know how long I'll be
But I'm not gonna let you down
Darling wait and see
And between now and then ‘til I see you again
I'll be loving you, love me
Between now and then ‘til I see you again
I'll be loving you, love me[/i]

[wicked]

I think this post belongs in either the Off Topic forum or the First Aid forum.

~Wicked

[MormonGirlie]

Sorry about that mess up. At first I was like well excuse me, but I reread it and figurd you didnt mean for it to sound crappy so Forgive me.

[twistedrealityoflove]

wow that was realy good I think I heard that before