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LEGACY: Prologue

Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 2:23 pm
by lilly23
LEGACY

Author: lilly23

Rating:PG-13 for violence and some senusality, but it might change in much later chapters of story even turn R but I would inform you when that comes.

Summary:

How would Heero Yuy react if he meets the young woman who bore his last name and claims that she was his daughter? Will he shoo her out claiming he had no child for it was only a scheme or will he accept her into his family?

Prologue:

A Page from Marie's Dairy:

If I chose to go back and change what had happened six months ago and forget about, but I can not for I know it was meant to happen. Some would say that it was a mistake for me to be born in this untrusted world, but I can not change what I am or what had done for I know that there is it no turning back.

My name is Marie Helene Yuy. I am daughter of Heero Yuy the one of the most deadliest and skilled Gundam Pilot that still walks the face of this earth. I am not shamed for what I am but it is up to you dear reader who will read this story and when you will finish it then you will decide will you judge me for what I am or will you accept me? That question and option I am leaving it to you.

I am Marie Yuy, the sins and blood of my father still ran deep inside of me and this is it my story....

TBC...

Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 2:51 pm
by Kainen
Interesting concept...but what about the mother?

Posted: Wed Apr 12, 2006 2:58 pm
by lilac310
yea..if the girl was being truthful...then, the mother's gotta be Relena...this is an HYRP forum afterall...or it could be a different mom but Heero should currently be with Relena...something like that..

Posted: Mon May 29, 2006 2:51 pm
by WingZero2118
a very interesting way to start a story. this can go a few different ways from the very start which captures the readers attention and gets them thinking. very wise use of the pull a persons imagination has on whether or not they will continue reading. i shall investigate the other chapters to see if they hold the same pull. keep up the good work.