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Fire and Ice

Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 3:55 am
by mainime
Title: Fire and Ice
Day/Theme: November 18 / Bring you to your knees
Series: Gundam Wing AC
Character/Pairing: Heero / Relena
Rating: R (there's a lot of mature stuff, I tell you)
Notes: I don't own anything from Gundam Wing. Standard disclaimers apply as always. x-posted again on 31_days.



Each and everytime he thrust into her, he could feel the blood rushing to his head and a sound similar to ocean waves would crash down on his ears as he shuddered in her arms.

They were like fire and ice, a deadly combination that left them both wanting. The normally cool exterior she had during the day disappeared as soon as he would take her in his arms.

She came alive under his fingertips, her smooth skin scalding him as he found hidden nerve endings across her body. He burned for her, the fire always strong in his eyes when he would catch but a glimpse of her during the day.

As soon as he kissed her lips, he would feel his very soul slipping over the edge and falling into an abyss, even as she offered herself to him, her body bowing upwards in a graceful arch as he took her in again and again.

He explored every part of her body, starved and lusting and agonized as she returned every kiss with a breathless whisper and a smile.

She was his Ice Queen, his goddess. She brought him to his knees with how she gave herself up to him for every night of passion. He hungered for everything about her: the proud swell of her breasts, the silkiness of her thighs, the graceful plunge of her waist into shapely hips... her iridiscent tresses that fell around her face in wild abandon, the magic of her blue-green eyes, her soft and pliant lips...

In her arms, he allowed himself to lose control, to go insane and taste her, feel her underneath him and marvel at her delicate neck that she exposed to him when they approached the edge of bliss.

She was his.

He was hers.

Fire and Ice they were.

Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 5:08 am
by perfectpeach
another shorty! whee! shortbread!

this is another good pieve achievd honey. keep it up! very nice metaphroical descriptions.

Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 6:52 pm
by mainime
perfectpeach wrote:another shorty! whee! shortbread!

this is another good pieve achievd honey. keep it up! very nice metaphroical descriptions.
Thankee! :salute: I shall try my very damndest to improve. :D

Posted: Sun Dec 18, 2005 11:01 pm
by takisha16
This was so cute!
I loved the contrast you made between Heero and Relena.
They are so different and yet they come perfectly together in your story!
Nice job!

Posted: Mon Dec 19, 2005 8:47 am
by Andrea
Steamy. It's amazing how you can portray so much sensuality in such few words.

Word of advice, though... Post your fic's rating, especially when it's above PG-13 (T+) on the subject line. It's a rule in these forums/board.

Neeway, good ficlet and thanks for sharing!

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 7:19 am
by mainime
Gawd, I knew I forgot something. :oops: But thank you for the reminder and thank you for the comments. :)

Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 7:09 pm
by Kainen
As soon as he kissed her lips, he would feel his very soul slipping over the edge and falling into an abyss,
Wonderful wording!!! Excellent. Keep it up!

Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2005 10:26 am
by mainime
Thank you! :D

Posted: Mon Mar 13, 2006 6:33 pm
by HiFreak
Very nice love the tone.
I love all your little short fics.