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Kiss

Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 5:17 pm
by sitboy007
my short little blurb that i wrote when i had a sudden surge of inspiration. Enjoy.


They had been spending too much time together. So as a consequence, the inevitable happened. The romance started with a good night kiss. He was just so irresistible, standing there in her doorway, worn out from a week of little to no sleep and constant vigilance. So she kissed him. She had expected him to pull away and inform her that they couldn't, shouldn't and wouldn't, because it was inappropriate and unprofessional. However he didn't. Instead he let her lips linger against his for a little while before pulling away. With a low "goodnight" began five years of kissing, touching, waking up against each others chest, worrying if he will come back, taking several bullets for her, fighting over absolutely nothing, and constant companionship. But most of all, five years of loving each other. Therefore at this particular moment, it felt right to end courtship and begin marriage with a kiss.

Posted: Wed Nov 09, 2005 6:50 pm
by Morrighan
Awww...!!!! I love the fluff. I love how the kiss theme ties the beginning and the end together. :D

Masterfully done. :D

Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 12:36 am
by RelenaDorlinYuy1
aww that is soo sweet ^_^ i feel giddy for some reason hehehhe good job

~Sommer~

Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 11:55 am
by Jackie
:) Yea! So short and yet so sweet! Like a tootsie roll... :lol: Great job! 8)

Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2005 12:26 pm
by perfectpeach
i love shorties! thank you my love!

Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 1:07 am
by kawaiiemogirl
This short story made me happy inside. :D Thanks. I was kinda having a bad day. This makes me feel better. D:

Posted: Fri Nov 11, 2005 8:28 am
by Andrea
Sweetness!!

I loved it, Sitboy007; I enjoyed how you kept the language light and fluffy. Lovely!!

Posted: Sat Nov 12, 2005 3:47 pm
by sitboy007
kawaiiemogirl said
This short story made me happy inside. Thanks. I was kinda having a bad day. This makes me feel better. D:

i'm glad i could mae you feel better.

Thanx for the reviews!

Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 7:43 pm
by HiFreak
That was the best paragraph I have ever read.
You have manage to sum up all my dreams for Heero and Relena in less than 100 words. Way to go. :salute:

Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 9:58 pm
by sitboy007
Oh, wow, thanx, HiFreak. That really made my day.