Blissful Ignorance

Posted: **Wed Oct 23, 2002 11:21 pm**

Mystery pairing, so it's really open to interpretation, but I had one of the traditional couples in mind. ^_^

<b>The Young Romantic</b>

In among the plastic towers,
As the Barefoot touches soil,
Gather up bouquets of flowers
And fasten them with wire coils.

Catch the heat of shattered glass,
Hold the pinpricks burning bright;
Look upon discarded pasts
In the greyed and silent night.

Cast about for faded souls,
Feast upon the roasted dove;
As the sweetest birdsong lulls
Pledge to me eternal love.

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<i>Thank you very much for reading.

Agape

Psyche</i>

Posted: **Sat Apr 19, 2003 3:06 pm**

different...but cool

-muse-

Posted: **Fri May 02, 2003 12:25 pm**

silent muse wrote:different...but cool

Thanks!

~Psyche

Posted: **Fri Jun 20, 2003 9:01 am**

i've got 2 agree with silent muse. it is different, but cool. very cool. rather sweet and heartwrenching at the same time. wonderful.

Posted: **Fri Jul 04, 2003 10:54 pm**

Oooh very nice! I love the way it flows, and the imagery you use. For some reason I kept seeing Treize and Une? Maybe it was just the references to flowers and the roasted dove :

: Wonderful poem!

Posted: **Sat Jul 05, 2003 1:08 am**

Beautiful poem! It's haunting and leaves such a striking image in my mind. *applauds*

Posted: **Sat Jul 05, 2003 10:02 am**

oooo!! ur poem's very symbolic.
nicely done! i loved the mental imagery and the darkness to it.

Posted: **Sat Jun 26, 2004 10:34 am**

i liked...very mysterious, but interesting and wonderful at the same time ! Great job!

Posted: **Wed Jun 30, 2004 9:06 am**

Sweet

Was it Duo and Hilde?..