[Poem] Road Trip to Heaven

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[Poem] Road Trip to Heaven

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<center> Road Trip to Heaven


I used to pursue Heaven
You know, that hidden pathway
Trying to find that gate
That would lead me to happiness

I cruised down endless roads
Reading and following the signs
From dawn ?til the shield of night
Not knowing I was being denied

Why are all songs about love?
They don?t understand its high
They?re all about nonsense fervor
About random lovers meeting at night

Then I learned I was being deceived
I had traveled every single path
Down every available, endless road
And I was still stuck on this shore

Heaven always eluded me
I had walked the world over
Always ending empty-handed
Always ending heavy-hearted

So one day I finally got bored
Tired of wandering around aimlessly
So I took a breath and sprouted wings
Crashing and burning, I learned to soar

I floated over the Delphian brine
Climbed high into the night sky
On nimble wings, I reached the stars
Witnessed their beauty so bright

I found passion and became stardust
Created meaning, an identity
Waiting restlessly for every day?s dusk
To bask in the beauty of eternity

I travel on shooting stars
From now ?til the end of time
Ever-observant, ever-waiting
For the truth of Heaven?s Gateway

And so this way, I bid farewell
To my past, to the sand and the brine
To daylight and to oblivious love songs
On stardust clouds as I follow Heaven?s signs</center>

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Post by Morrighan »

Ooh..! Pretty! I can see how this represents a lot of things that you've gone through just within this past year.

Great job, sis! :D
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Post by Andrea »

Thanks, sis'. I shall huggle you to the end of time, and after that is done, I shall glomp you some more. Again, until the end of time. Such a vicious cycle.... *shakes head*

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Post by Mellie »

I forgot to review this ages ago! But, I really did enjoy it. It was very well done and spoke volumes. Your poetry is always so flowing and elegant. <3 it and you!

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Post by AnShino »

It was simply beautiful. I liked the voice of the poem.. I loved everything. It was really truly touching. <3
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Post by Perfect Soldier »

I have been long since been dead but i'm back now and immediately thuroughly impressed with the talent BI has always had here on these forums. It was very exceptional. Hope to read more again soon.

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