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Gundam Wing: Waltz Remix ch.1 (NC-17)

Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 1:11 pm
by matisleonhart
Holla reader and writers. Tis I, Matisleonhart back with a new action pack story called “Gundam Wing: Waltz Remix”. This story is fill with every juicy thing you could want in a gundam series, action, one on one battle, music (remixes of coarse), comedy, and of coarse, my favorite, romance which includes two, yes two love scene. Captain, captain, LEGAL CRAP, dead ahead: I do not own Gundam Wing or its characters, nor do I own any music played in this fic. This fic is rated NC-17 for violence, language, and sex, if you are underage, leave now before I corrupt your pure, innocent minds. Ladies and gentlemen, “The Christmas Wish” was just batting practices, Now I’m stepping up to the plate and I’m swinging for the fences baby. In the great words of Captain from MXC, lets get it on.

P.S. In the case that you been under a rock for the past 20 years, * means thought.
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A small ringing bell awoke Relena from her dreams. She slowly opened her eyes to the appearing day.

“Good morning Miss Relena, I hope you had a wonderful night sleep.” Said Pagen as he came in with Relena usual coffee and morning newspaper. “Miss Kasumi called and said that she’d be here in a hour”

“Oh that right, I’m suppose to take her with me when I go see the new Preventer building being built.”

Pagen left to prepare for Miss Kasumi arrive, leaving Relena time to sneak a peek at a picture of him. She didn’t know who took it, but she knew who ever did, knew that she was in love with him. In the picture, he was leaning over a bar, looking out to the ocean as if to searching for answer. It always seem to give her hope that he is still alive and that one day he might return as she put away so that she could get ready for the day.
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A mysterious figure watch a video feed in the dark. The video feed was a secret camera in Relena’s room as the dark figure watch Relena get undressed. As he watched Relena enter her bathroom as he switched to another secret camera in her shower. The dark figure smiled as Relena entered the shower and began to clean herself.

“Yes Relena, wash those succulent breasts. Oh I can’t wait to get you in my bed. All in due time my dear, in due time.” As the dark figure began to laugh. His laughter was cut off by the phone ringing. As he picked it up, a deep voice came on the other end.

“All lights are green sir.”

“Good, good. Then commence with Operation Apocalypse at once.” As the dark figure put the phone back on the hook and turn his attention back to the video feeds, where to his enjoyment, Relena had began to wash her nether regions. He smiled as he knew what would happen next.
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Bzzt Bzzt. He hit the alarm with force as Thomas pulled a pillow over his head. He couldn’t believe that it was 7:00 already,

*my how two hours pass by so quickly* he thought. He rolled back over to look at the ceiling as he heard little running footstep coming down the hall.

“Oh no.” He watched as his door flew open and Lauren and Jason rushed in and with a Spiderman like leap, landed on his hip.

“Daddy, daddy, time to wake up.” Said Lauren with enthusiasm.

“Thank you Lauren, but the alarm did a good enough job, don’t you think?”

“Daddy, you promise to take us to the park today.” Remarked Jason as his sister nodded.

“But it only seven o’clock and daddy need a little more sleep. Go watch some cartoons or something” Thomas groaned still half asleep.

“Okay” Chirped both kids in unison as they scooted to the end of the bed to turn on the TV. Thomas was about to go back to sleep when his phone rang and he rolled over to answer it. He was about to make a comment to the person on the other end, but thought against it since there was kids in the room.

“Hello.”

“Yo Thomas, get your ass in gear. They’re pulling the operation today and you got four hour to get to the Sanq kingdom.”

“You sure.”

“Yes I’m sure, come on let go. We have a jet for you and a jet for your kids, we be waiting for you at Asia base.” As Thomas hanged up the phone he jumped out of bed and looked at his kids,

“Change of plans kids, we’re gonna go see Uncle Marcus.”
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A limo pulled up to the construction site of the new Preventer building being built. Instead of waiting for someone to open the door, both Kasumi and Relena open the door and rushed towards the entrance of the almost finished building.

“I’m sorry Kasumi, I totally lost track of time in the shower.” Relena apologized.

*Lost my mind is more like it* Relena thought as they reached the entrance. She really couldn’t explain it though. Every morning when she would wash her self in her nether regions, she would start to think about him and get hot and heavy. She would always end up masturbating after a couple of minutes of thinking about him, not that she was embarrassed about it, she just wonder how one person could have such an effect on another like that.

“No biggie. We all lose track of time sometimes Miss Relena.” Chirped Kasumi with a smile as they walk in and found the other waiting for them. All of Relena’s friends were there. Dou and Hilde, Quatre and Dorothy who were visiting from running the Winner corporation, Wufei and Sally, Milliardo and Noin, and Trowa were all there. Catharine wanted to come, but couldn’t because of the circus.

Then there was Miss Kasumi, pop singer extraordinaire, and world star. Relena met her at a peace promotional concert two years ago and they’ve been friends ever since. She had long red hair that at the moment was braided, and a had the face of a Japanese goddess. She was wearing a pink shirt with a red heart in the middle with the words, “Love and peace” in it, and a black skirt that reached to her mid-thigh, you know the kind that with one gust of wind, the secret out, which today was white cotton panties. Of coarse her shirt did a very good job of showing of her 35 D breast. Today she was every fanboys fantasy, which was usually everyday. As they waited, a lady came up to them.

“Miss Relena? We’d like to thank you and your friends for visiting the progress of the building. If you’d wait right here, I’ll have a guide take you on a tour.

As they waited, a construction worker in a hat came up to Zechs. “Preventer Wind, Preventer Phoenix reporting for duty sir.”

“What are you doing here Phoenix.” Replied Zechs.

“My job Zechs, protecting your sister.” As the worker stepped into the elevator as Relena watched. She knew that guy talking to her brother looked familiar, but couldn‘t put her finger on it. A few minutes later a young man came up to the group.

“Hi, my name is Reno and I’ll be your guild for today.” As he directed them into the elevators. When the elevator reached its destination, the group stepped into a lobby with a skylight.

“As you can see, this floor will house the new Preventer headquarters and if you don’t mind, please stay where you are Miss Relena” Said Reno as he had pull a gun out and was currently pointing it at Relena. Reno was about to cock his gun when he heard another one cock behind him.

“Drop the weapon now Reno.”

“I know that voice.” Said Relena as she looked behind Reno to meet the cobalt blue eyes that she knew and love.

“Heero.”

“Way to go Heero, great timing.” Chirped Duo.

“Yeah, naturally.” Followed Wufei.

“Very good Preventer Phoenix, or should I say Heero Yuy, but if you don’t want your friends to get hurt, I suggest that you drop your weapon.” Said Reno as the group was now surrounded by construction worker with machine guns.

Above them, a figure in a ninja like outfit looked down at the scene. he was checking to make sure he had everything when a voice came in on his ear piece.

“Yo Thomas, you gonna go for it.”

“Yeah Marcus, just make sure your ready to receive the package. start pumping the music in now.”

"All way got to set the mood, don't cha motherfucker." Marcus replied.

The group started to hear a church like organ music play as a choir began to chant in the song. all of a sudden the music changed to rock and roll and a voice came on.

“I'll steal your soul for a second chance You will die, come what may Your soul makes me stronger In your life you'll breathe no longer Fade away in a quest for life Until the end, don't judge me nice”

As the guitar rift started to play, Thomas came crashing down through the skylight with his two gun drawn. He took three shots, killing the three worker closest to the group. The gunfight continued until both side were out of bullets.

As the music changed again to a rap style like house beat. Reno spoke, “Your all out of bullet”

“So are you, why don’t we put are guns down and settle this like men” Thomas said as both side put down their guns. The terrorist began to circle Thomas as he walked into the middle of the room as the music got louder.

When a voice in the music said, “Listen up all you motherfuckers”, Thomas whispered the words, “Showtime”, and threw a straight side kick to the guy on his left, knocking him out completely.

At that point all his opponents tried to tackle him, but he jumped out of the way. He then ran to a wall as a guy chased him. when he got to the wall he proceeded to run up it and over the guy and dropkick the thugs head into the wall where he fell and his blood stained the wall. Right as Thomas landed, a guy charged him from behind, but Thomas flipped over him and at the same time he twisted and broke the guy neck. When Thomas landed, the guy fell to the floor. He swept the next attacker and followed that with a side kick to the guy to his left. He then sent a chop to the throat of the guy he swept, crushing it instantly.

Thomas caught the punch that followed and twisted the guy arm. While still holding on to the guy arm, he jump off three thugs and landed on the guy neck. He proceeded to twist the guy neck, breaking it in the process and hurricarana the guy to the wall. He then caught the next thug in a STK throw and slam him to the ground.

He caught the next guy punch and threw him over his shoulder. He dodged the next guy and spun around, catching his neck between his leg and thigh and Thomas proceeded to squeeze, breaking the guy neck immediately.

When there was one guy left Thomas ran at the guy full force. He then sent a fury of punch to the guy gut and finished with a uppercut. Reno had snuck up on Thomas and grabbed his arm, where he tried to throw him. Thomas though land on his feet, not before his right arm was dislocated. Thomas then sent a backflip kick to Reno, successfully connecting with his jaw, and then he caught Reno in the air with his left hand drove him to the ground, where he broke Reno neck.

When the fighting was done, all of Relena’s potential Kidnappers were either dead or seriously injured.

“That it, time to go.” Said Thomas as he reached into his bag and brought out plastic explosive.

“Excuse me, but what are you doing.” Asked Relena.

“I’m gonna blow the shit out this wall, that what I’m doing.” Said Thomas as he set the explosive.

“To where, we’re forty two story high.” Said Duo as Thomas finished setting the explosive.

“All right, everybody cover up." as Thomas proceeded to blow a hole in the wall to which a hover cargo jet appear and they began to board. Once every one was aboard Thomas sat down as the jet took off for Asia base.

“What the hell were you doing there Thomas.” Yelled Heero.

“Nice to see you to Heero.” Said Thomas as he pull off his mask to free his long shoulder blade length black hair. “Hold that thought for one moment.” Said Thomas as he took off his shirt, exposing his lean, trim body. His body could only be described as the body that every man would want as he proceeded to relocate his arm, much to everybody dismay. "Oh that feels so fucking great." Thomas said after hae had relocted his arm.

“Well that answers that question, anybody who relocate their own arm has to be a friend of your Heero.” Said Duo as Heero stared at his friend.

“What was with the music Thomas.” Asked Heero as everybody looked at Thomas.

“You know music helps me focus. Besides, I had set the mood.” Thomas replided.

"Jackass." Heero mumbled.

"Your welcome." Thomas replied as the converstation left evrybody wondering what the hell was going on. As He got up and walked to Kasumi who was visibly shaking from the whole ordeal. He put a hand on her shoulder and said, “It okay, we’re safe now. Pilot, to Asia base and step on it.”

“Excuse me, but why are you taking us to your base.” Asked Relena.

“Well, unfortunately we have to expose how much shit your in, since the Preventer didn’t take are information seriously.”

“Can we trust him.” Whispered Trowa.

“I think so, I personally like the guy.” said Wufei.

“You would, he just took down a bunch of armed terrorist with his bare hands.” Chirped Duo.

“Now not the time to be arguing, what to you think Zechs.” Replied Quatre.

“All I know is that Heero knows this guy, so I think we should all wait and see what happen, but be on your guard.” Said Zechs as the jet flew towards Asia base.
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They arrived at a secret base in the jungle mountains of southeast Asia. As they walked down a long corridor, Relena finally found the strength to ask the question she been wanting to ask since Heero revealed himself. “Heero, how long have you been back.” Instead of Heero answering her question, Zechs did.

“I hired Heero a year and a half ago to protect you from the shadows and to protect the peace you have created.”

“But why Milliardo, you know how I feel about him.”

“Sometimes Relena, you need protection, even from your self.”

At that point, Relena anger over the whole situation popped and she did something she hardly ever do, she cursed.

“You bastard.” Yelled Relena as she slapped Zechs with all her might. Sally and Noin restrained Relena as Zechs brought a hand to his face in a effort to smooth the pain.

“As much as I love to watch the Jerry Springer Show, We have to get to the briefing room. Beside Relena, you get to see Heero everyday from the photo I sent you.” Relena face turn from anger to shock as she realized what he meant.

“You sent me that photo.”

“Yep, the one you keep in you nightstand.” Thomas said as Marcus walked up to the group. Marcus was a black individual of 6'1, 23 years of age, and was bald.

“What You so happy about motherfucker.” Asked Thomas.

“I’m so happy because we finally caught this motherfucker. If ya’ll will follow me, I will take you to the briefing room.” Said Marcus. They all entered the briefing room which had a large TV in one wall. Every one was seated as Marcus spoke,

“Now, Miss Relena, the world knows by now that a kidnapping attempt had been made and the Preventer are reporting that you are in a undisclosed location. This message was sent a half hour ago by the prime minister of the ETU, Steve Myce, here it is.” The group watched as PM Steve Myce picture came on and it spoke.

“Miss Relena, I am happy to hear that your kidnapper were unsuccessful, thought I’m afraid that I’m the bearer of bad news. H.O.T.A., the terrorist that tried to kidnap you insist that you and the Preventer comply with their demands or they will unleash weapons of destruction upon the earth and colonies. They have asked me to tell you their demand and they are as follow, you are to marry their leader and Miss Kasumi is to perform a live concert for them. They are Christian fundamentalist that believe it is time for you to get married and they believe that Miss Kasumi performing for them will bring people to their cause. Now I have talk to their leader and I have talk them out of forcing you to marry their leader, only they said, if you marry me. I know that this unfortunate for you, but I can promise you one thing Miss Relena, and that is that I’ll be the best husband I can be. Good day.” As PM Myce face went off the screen, he left the group in shock while Thomas began to laugh out loud.

“I can’t believe that motherfucker said that with a straight face. That boy must of been practicing. Miss Relena, I know for a fact he is lying because he is the leader of H.O.T.A.. Ever since Steve Myce became PM of the ETU, he and the ETU have financially backed every thing from the OZ revolution to the Mariemaia incident, and H.O.T.A. is a terrorist group that does their dirty work. They want war because it will weaken countries and colonies and make them easier to overpower and take control of. We know this because me, Marcus and everybody on this base are part of a group called the G-Forcers and are sole purpose is to expose the ETU for what they are and defeat them. You see both Steve Myce and his brother Virgil, believe that they are gods and they believe that you and Miss Kasumi must pay because you two have brought peace to both the earth and the colonies. They want to make you pay by making you their sexual slaves. They have a doctor called Dr. Zeal who has made this new drug that will attack your sexual hormones and send your sex drive into overdrive to the point where you’d fuck anything that walks. They plan on using this to control you and to gain control of the ESUN and popularity in the world. Their threat of weapons however, is true. They have an army of mobile dolls three times the size of the one in the Mariemaia incident on earth and five times the size in space.”

“I don’t believe you, I’ve met Mr. Myce and he doesn't seem like that kind of person.” Said Relena

“You don’t believe me here, take a look at this folder.” Both Relena and Kasumi open the folder and to their surprise it contained photo of both of them at places like the mall, the beach and their own bedrooms.

“If you still don’t believe me, let me show you something. Miss Relena, at what time did you shower today?”

“Um, around seven.”

“Okay, well Steve Myce has a private video feed in his room. Let take a look at what Mr. Myce was watching this morning at 7 A.M..” With that, Thomas turn on the TV and on the TV was footage of Relena showering today and everybody was floored to say the least. Thomas turned it off right before Relena started to wash her nether regions for Relena sake for he knew what would happen next.

“If you still don’t believe me, this is a recording of a phone conversation between PM Myce and his brother Virgil from last night.” They listen as Virgil voice came on the recording.

“Brother, brother, how much longer do I have to wait to fuck that bitch Kasumi.”

“Soon brother, we’ll both get are bitches and we’ll make them pay for messing with are plans.”

“I can’t wait to teach that bitch the meaning of pain and pleasure.”

“Don’t worry brother, Operation Apocalypse begins tomorrow. By the time we’ll done with them, they’re give us the world just to suck are dicks.” The brothers began to laugh as the recording faded out.

All the days event were finally to much for Relena and Kasumi as they began to cry.

“Look, Miss Relena and Miss Kasumi, you have my word and the word of the G-Forcers that we will do everything we can to protect you and to catch these guy.” Stated Thomas as he comfort them.

“Mr. Matis, I’d like to offer my help in any way I can. I am a friend of Miss Relena and a former gundam pilot and I’m sure that I will be of some use to you.” Replied Quatre. “

Yeah, Relena and Kasumi are our friends and we won’t let them down without a fight.” Chirped Duo.

“You sold me, these guys have way to much power.” Quoted Wufei.

“Thank you everyone.” Replied Relena as she began to dry her tears.

“First though, we need a plan.” Stated Trowa.

“Well if you will follow Marcus, we’ll show you are plan in just a minute. first I need to have a chat with Heero.” As The group got up and left the room, leaving Heero and Thomas alone.

“I can’t believe you didn’t tell her motherfucker. What your fucking problem.” Before Heero could speak, Thomas cut him off, “No, don’t say nothing. Two years ago, you weren’t drunk, you weren’t high, you admitted to me that you love Relena. It two years later and she doesn’t even know you were back, let alone that you love her.”

“I couldn’t tell her because I would be putting her in danger. Beside, she deserves someone better then me.” Replied Heero.

“Man, every time she walked out the door she in danger. You need to stop fucking worrying about what could happen and just deal with what life gives you man. Also, she may deserve better, but she wants you, only god knows why. Man Heero, grow up and grow some fucking balls.” Stated Thomas as they walked to join the others. When they finally reach them, they were waiting by a hanger door.

“So what your plan.“ Asked Trowa. As Thomas open the door he spoke,

“So the problem is that they have a large mobile doll force and we have no mobile suits, right.”

“Well, if we had are Gundam, it wouldn’t be a problem.” Stated Duo. Thomas just smiled and said,

“Your wish is my command,” as he flipped a switch, lighting up the left side of the hanger. There, in all their glory were Altron Gundam, Sandrock, Heavyarms, Deathscythe Hell, and Wing Zero Custom. Each pilot went to there Gundams in disbelief as Thomas walked to the other side of the hanger.

“This is great, but we still don’t stand a chance. Maybe if we had five more Gundams we’d have a chance.” Stated Trowa.

Thomas flipped another switch, lighting up the right side of the hanger. Thomas leaned back against the wall and smiled as he left the group before him in awe. There, before their eyes stood five more Gundams.
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Whew, as they always say, the first chapter is always the hardest. Just don’t expect the next chapter so soon, I have to rest for a couple of days. I’ve been really working hard to get this first chapter out to you guy. All I can say about the next chapter is that it is gonna be a blast so get ready to laugh your asses off okay. By the way, I had this great idea that just for fun, I’d should put together a list of song for Waltz Remix like a soundtrack, what do you guy think? Time for the shout out and this one go out to everybody who holla back a reply for my Waltz Remix Preview, thanks, you guy were really helpful. Remember to holla back. Peace!

Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 1:54 pm
by perfectpeach
yay! first review! um. pervy people. I wanna shoot em.^^
and secondly, you'd best get these chapters up soon coz I wont have a computer in a months time.

Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 5:40 pm
by Wingnut
Not bad. You could tone down the language though, or at least mix up the phrases some.
It would also help if you break up the paragraphs when people are speaking to each other so we can better tell who is speaking to who, espically with the OCs.

Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 9:50 am
by matisleonhart
thanks nut, this is my first try at action stuff. glad to know I didn't mess it up

Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 11:44 am
by KPGUNDAM
Very good. I see this story being a hit.

Please post the next chapter :razz: :lol:

Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2005 6:23 pm
by WingZero2118
great start. very graphic. keep up the good work and i look forward to reading the next chapter

Posted: Sun Apr 17, 2005 2:04 pm
by Raspberry
:eek: :eek: Whoa... awesome :D

Matis, I must admitt that you're better and better in every chappie! :D

And this was... amazing. You really CAN write a fighting scene, I just can't wait to see fights between Mobile Suits! Besides - the humor, action and a bit of romance... you're making ths ficcie great! :D

But I have a question, though. Do G-boys' Gundams have some new weapons?..

Okay, now the part of squeeling :-P :lol: Weeee, the ass-kicking by Thomas was tha best! :lol: Oh, oh, and Relene in the shower... :lol: :oops: :lol: He he, naughty gal :wink: And.. Heero you idiot just go tell her you love her and stop talking that $hit of not being worth her! Alright, done :-P

So, in conclusion - great work Matis and take your time in writing next part :salute: :D

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 1:04 am
by miz_lou
[sorry about the delay on my post Matis ^^ but I's here as promised! :bounce: I wouldn't miss it! :x to college :evil: hence the twenty edits at the bottom of the message-break for classwork, return at night to be sure to include everything :-D IM would be easier ;-)]

First: AWWWW Matis a DADi! *drools* how cute! *noogies Primetime's 'full time' kids*

Very very nice Tom. I am sure this took a lot of work to plan out. You did a wonderful job, I see no mixups with the plot and who's got connections with whom. ^^ Sometimes it's easy to do that in a story-especially one as involved as this. It is quite an undertaking! And you excelled! I honestly didn't know what to expect coming into this story ^^ and I must say I am by no means dissappointed.

The action scene with Tom was nice! Kick @$$ (even impressed Wufei! oO), but Im wondering, did the Gboys help out at all? Or was it Matis all the way? And the music...nice touch 8)
And where did Matis' kids go? Is he a single father? *thinks: ...maybe you'll find out next chapter, Lou dear-chill it, you're scaring all the nice people again* :oops:

Poor Relena in the pressroom!! Eya, if I were displayed naked on a screen in front of the man I spent years in love with and wondered if he was coming back-the first day they were back in the same room together-I would have just DIED.

That hormone enhancer...heh heh, you know, I like the silent, shy Heero...but if he has a hard time opening up...you could always use that on him~you know...as a last resort type thing *grins like h*ll* The things I put poor Heero through...*evil grin* Matis might could use that line to ruffle Heero up a bit ^^ heh *plots evilly*

Those two bros remind me of the brothers from Gundam X for some reason...I duno if you have seen that or not. But they are def, as Peach said, ''pervy people'' ~ very shovinist males :x ...good thing there are guys like you and the Gboys to beat them into submission ;-) *rubs hands in anticipation*

Can't wait for the next chapter Tom!! And if you need prodding to get it posted...heh heh, IM me [Yahoo ~ gunny_lou] or need some help breaking up the paragraphs so that they are easier to read and proof reading, I def wouldn't mind doing that for ya, just email me: mizlousmailbox@hotmail.com

:wink: but just know what you are getting into ^^ *covers Peach's mouth* :-P

Posted: Tue Apr 19, 2005 2:00 am
by AnShino
*laughs* that was really, really humorous. I liked it. Just a suggestion though, please seperate the dialogue between people. I can give you an example via PM or yahoo [anzepnai]. PErsonally I prefer Yahoo because it permits you to question me on the spot, but that's just me. *waves* can't wait for the enxt chapter! ^_^

Posted: Sun May 01, 2005 12:13 pm
by Irishgal
:razz: cool I can't wait for the second chapter!!! :salute: