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[Poem] Moonlit Encounters

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 10:50 pm
by Andrea
Moonlit Encounters
By Andrea Sinisterra
Rated PG-13
Standard Disclaimers Apply


This was originally written as a Christmas giftfic for Lauren. I wrote it with Heero and Relena in mind, so thought I could post it here. Hope you all like it!

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You held me, love

So urgent and explicit

This pleasure, unconquered

We move along, you and I

Together in synchronicity

Fire tongues dancing

Across weathered, blind walls

In silence, the stars sleep

Relieved of their relentless vigil

We hide selfishly from others

Treasuring these moments

Limited, frozen in time

Everlasting in our hearts

They seek enviously

through darkened halls

Greedy in their quest

There's no access though

to this oblivion we are in

Under bright moon and

Jealous, unseeing eyes

We'll hold each other

For minutes on end

Together until dawn

When once lidded, blind eyes

Become unfolded and clear

Intruding pass lit walls

Once a reverent silence

Now shattered and broken

Until we meet again, love

Another night, another moon

Fire tongues once again renewed

For this night has ended

And the veil, withdrawn

Farewell, my love

Until we meet again</center>

Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 10:58 pm
by Mellie
Andrea, your poems are just amazing! The fluidity, the eloquence, it is always beautiful with just a kiss of sadness intertwined. I loved it.

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 12:30 am
by Andrea
*huggles Mellie to near death*

Thank you, sweetie! Your words make me feel really good about my poetry. I'm very glad you liked it... I've noticed I'm very angsty with my writing... -___-"

'A kiss of sadness', I shall see it this way from now on.

Thanks again!

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 12:33 pm
by takisha16
wow! :eek:
that was really deep.
I've been reading many poems posted by people here on BI and not many of them contain the emotions we want to see wrtten down so eloquently.
very nice!
I've been a long time fan of anything you ever write. *_*
Ocassionally, if the fics are really good, I print them out so I can take them when I travel and have no computer nearby. Reading them over and over makes you really appreciate the people who make such things possible!!
keep it coming!

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 3:16 pm
by teardropdangel
*smiles with dreamy eyes* I don't believe I've ever read an 1xR poem before. That was great Andrea.

Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 2:41 pm
by Andrea
Takisha, wow. Thanks, it's not everyday one hears that. I appreciate your words, immensely. Truly, I'm feeling very happy!

And Teardropdangel, thanks for your kind words. There have been quite a few 1xR poems posted here; I think Morrighan has posted a few. You should check those out.

^^!!!

Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 10:27 pm
by Lauren
I can't belive I'm only now seeing this! Beautiful poem, Andrea <3 It really was my favorite Xmas gift. I have it saved on my computer :D :D :D Your talent makes me green with envy and proud to call you friend <3