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Past destruction chp 6 teaser

Posted: Tue Nov 16, 2004 10:54 pm
by valkyrie skye
ok, this chapter is gonna be a little long because i'm fast forwarding his growing up to become the Heero we all love and adore. So in this chapter, i'm gonna go through all the pivotal moments of his life up until the day Operation metor started (aka: the beginning of the series) and so just to prove that i have been working on this, here is a snippet of Piot 01 about to undergo the beginning phases of becoming the perfect soldier

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?Pilot 01.?

He turned quickly, his eyes, like wild blue orbs taking in everything all at once. It was Dr. J. He stood a couple of feet away from the young pilot, his mechanical arm holding the walking stick firmly upon the ground. The old man studied the pilot from his distance and after awhile, said, ?come here.?

Never hesitating, the pilot walked over to the old man and stood no more that two feet away from him. Pilot 01 eyed the Doctor with his dead blue eyes. Dr. J, for his part, reached to touch his face and looked closely into his eyes. ?I like how they?re looking so far. But I feel like there?s one more thing that has to go through.? Placing his hand to the side again, he asked, ?Do you understand why this punishment has to occur??

Pilot 01 shook his head ?No.?

Dr. J smirked ?No. I didn?t think so.?

Footsteps. His inside froze with fear. He turn to face a tall thin man, whom he remembered as Dr. J?s assistant, armed with a needle. And the next thing he knew, His eyes were being pulled down in sleep and then, Darkness.

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yes i know, not much, but as i said, its a long story, and this is just a snippet. But relax, it'll all come together soon...

-Valkyrie

ps: yes, this is the chapter in which i introduce Relena. :lol:

Re: Past destruction chp 6 teaser

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 2:02 am
by lilac310
You've finally come to your senses! It's about time you post this chapter 6 teaser.....I've been waiting forever....lol.....oh well, I'm just so giddy right now as I can no longer wait to read the rest of it...Keep it up and keep it coming!.....


valkyrie skye wrote:because i'm fast forwarding his growing up to become the Heero we all love and adore.
::points above:: this line made me giggle like a schoolgirl (well, technically, I'm still in school)...Go HEERO! :-P

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 5:48 am
by APerfectSoldier87
I'm so confused right now?

Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2004 11:15 am
by valkyrie skye
I'm so confused right now?
don't worry about it. Wait till chapter 6, it'll all make sense : )

-Valkyrie

Posted: Thu Nov 18, 2004 6:39 pm
by teardropdangel
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE

WRITE MORE :lol: