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Following Tradition (one-shot) HxR

Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 11:28 pm
by AliasGrace
Following Tradition (one-shot)
By: AliasGrace
Disclaimer: I do not own, but oh the possibilities if I did?
Note: a bit OOC from Heero. This is my first ever fic?dun dun duuuuuuuun









What a stupid stupid tradition.

Next mission: kill whoever thought this tradition up. What?s wrong with wanting to be with the one you love the day before the wedding? Screw tradition, Heero wanted to be with his fianc?, to hold and protect her (ok maybe do something else, but that?s beyond the point). His future wife was all alone and the thought made his chest ache, or maybe his chest ached because he was all alone.

Heero had tried every possible reason to be with his Relena. And every reason was answered with a slight smirk on his Best Man?s goofy face.

1) He was best fit for protecting her
?There are over 25 guards protecting each and every crevice of her room Heero, even bacteria won?t make it to Jousan without one of us gunning it down.?

2) Relena needed him.
?Or is it you need Relena?? This particular response resulted in a nice black and blue eye for Duo to bring to the ceremony. In his defense Heero stated that Relena did need something blue.

3) His toothbrush was in the room.
?You can borrow mine buddy!?

4) He forgot his laptop.
?Heero, you?ve never forgotten anything in your entire life, you wouldn?t start now.?

Heero even tried to sneak in, which he succeeded in doing until he found Hilde and not Relena in bed.
?Heero, honestly, you should at least attempt to follow this one tradition, for Relena.?
Heero just growled.
?Besides,? Hilde said. ?This all builds up to the excitement to your night together tomorrow.?
At that, Heero got a faraway look in his eyes. He nodded to Hilde and went back to his room.

Another hour passed but the thought of tomorrow night just wasn?t enough to placate Heero. He resigned himself to pacing in front of Relena?s door until both Duo and Wufei threatened brute force to remove him.

With a quick death glare Heero trudged back to his room. He flopped onto the bed in un-Perfect Soldier-like fashion.

Suddenly Heero?s pocket began to vibrate.
?Holy Shi?? That is quite a sensation, he thought.
He pulled the cell phone out and looked at the number; with a shock he opened the phone.
?Relena??
?Heero, you?re driving everyone crazy.? Came Relena?s calm voice.
?Wait I thought we weren?t supposed to have any contact until tomorrow.?
?No Heero, we can talk to each other all night, we just can?t see each other.?
::pause:: ?Oh.?
Relena giggled, ?But I feel your pain Heero. I miss you already and it?s been, what 3 hours??
?3 hours, 42 minutes, and 27 seconds.?
Heero could just sense Relena rolling her eyes at his response.
?Ever the Perfect Soldier huh.?
There was silence for a couple of seconds when Relena?s gentle voice spoke again.
?I?m nervous about tomorrow Heero.?
?Me too? he replied.
?I love you? she whispered.
?I love you too Relena.?

Relena sighed, ?Tell me a story Heero.?
?Ok??
Heero then proceeded to talk until Relena eventually fell asleep listening to Heero?s soothing and steady voice.

Once Heero recognized the steady breathing of a sleeping Relena, he felt his own eyes begin to droop, finally ready to succumb to sleep, content with listening to Relena?s breathing. For both had neglected to turn off their cell phones.

So that night the two lovers slept ?together? before the biggest day of their lives, without breaking the tradition.

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 10:31 am
by bookworm
Ah...that was so sweet! Fluff alert!!! Fluff alert!!!! Great job!!!!! Luv it!!!! :salute: :D

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 12:13 pm
by Morrighan
SQUEE!!! That's so cute!! I don't think that's really OOC at all! :D

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 1:30 pm
by AliasGrace
AWWWW thank you sooo much!! I wasn't sure if Heero was ooc or not cause it was my first fic so i was really nervous and excited about it. so thank you so sos os sos ososossosoo much!!!!!! :D :D :razz: :razz:

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 4:19 pm
by teardropdangel
That was SOOOOOO cool. Very funny.

Poor Heero. LOLOLOLOLOL :razz: :bounce: :D

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 4:27 pm
by Mellie
hehe! that was so cute!

Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2004 11:52 pm
by Lady Casper
hehehe i wonder how Duo and Wufei threatened him with...Duo's dry humor or Wufei's idea of a woman's significance?

lol It was very Cute AliasGrace...it was very good for your first fic indeed. :D

Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 2:38 am
by lilac310
That was refreshing!....I don't think I've ever read anything that enumerated the dialogue spoken by the other characters in the story...adds more clarity (I must say)....and you were able to pull it off....I really like this one...You kept it simple and sweet....oh! and may I add "fluffy" too.... ::jumps around:: ----> see :bounce: .....

...Great job....I like your work! Keep it up!... :razz:

Re: Following Tradition (one-shot) HxR

Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:42 am
by Wingnut
AliasGrace wrote: What a stupid stupid tradition.

Next mission: kill whoever thought this tradition up. What?s wrong with wanting to be with the one you love the day before the wedding?
Good idea, except said person(s) have been dead for many centuries.

Hell, you think you're a werck Yuy? What do you think your future brother-in-law is feeling right now?

Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:02 am
by unelueurdespoir
ouaw :eek: !!! g?niale ta fic :salute: merci beaucoup d'?crire de si belle histoire sur r?l?na x heero !!