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A wee bit o' drabble

Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 5:27 am
by Lauren
Some Sasusaku drabbles for you. One of them is over 100 by a bit, but we all love Lars, so we won't report her to boss lady, riiiiiight?

Cheryl: Lars -_-; Next time you want to be covert about going over drabble limits, don't put it up in your authors notes.

Lars: Hm. I DO need to work on this subtlety thing, don't I?

Wicked: Understatement.



DRABBLES!


How long had she endured those one sided hugs?

Sasuke knew the answer was as long as they had been acquainted. How empty it must have been, her arms grasping his body, never to feel his own return the welcome touch. Always reaching, never sure if it she was going to be slapped away.

He knew what that emptiness felt like, because he was experiencing it now. He crushed her to his chest, but she remained limp in the circle of his arms, no acknowledgement, no return embrace. The blood was everywhere. It left her empty.


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A shinobi respects his body and his mind.

A shinobi should be unburdened by mundane trivialities.

A shinobi should never show emotion.


?Oi, Sasuke! How?re ya?!?

?Hn. Naruto. Fine.?

A shinobi looks after his teammates.

A shinobi would sacrifice everything for the good of his mission.

A shinobi is not prone to distrac-


A low wolf whistle.

?Sakura!? Naruto grinned, ?New get-up!?

Sasuke cracked his eye open.

?It was my 16th birthday present. I was outgrowing my old dress.?

A shinobi ?is not?prone?

She smoothed her hair back, a self-conscious smile fastened on her lips. ?You think it looks okay??

Naruto pretended to be shocked. ?OKAY?! It?s more than okay! It?s downright sexy!?

A?shinobi?prone?


?Sasuke-kun, are you okay??

Prone?toooooo?

Dammit.



---

He would not move. Stationary, silent, motionless.

He would be as steadfast as she was when she jumped in front of him. As unwavering as she was even after the kunai nestled hungry fangs in her flesh. As immobile as she was when he held her, screaming at her that she was ?so stupid! How could you be so stupid!? God damn it, Sakura!?.

As still and tranquil as she was now. As she had been for so long.

?Sasuke?? Velvety green eyes fluttered open for the first time in weeks.

No. He would never move from her side again.

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Alright. That's all I got. Shpanks for reading!

Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2004 6:48 pm
by wicked
What the hell? You start off all angsty. Then we get hit with laughy. Then we're blindsided by angsty fluff!!!

I HEART you SO BAD!

Personally I don't think I've ever had a drabble near 100 words. *nods* Yup I'm all deviant like that.

I seriously love the second one. Just the last line itself is enough to make me laugh. We need more pervert!Sasuke.

Hell yeah!

~Wicked

Posted: Sat Nov 06, 2004 4:30 pm
by bookworm
I like. Like like. Wouldn't mind seeing what her birthday present and Sasuke's expression. Makes me look at Sasuke in a good light.

Posted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 10:18 pm
by csmlee
I hope you remember my reaction to the first drabble. It was somewhere along the lines of, "Nooooo! I hate you, Lars! Write angst again and I'll sit on you! And you don't want me to sit on you because I'm fat!!!"

And I mean it! :evil:

Lars: The "I hate you" part or the "I'm fat" part?
Cheryl: -__-
Lars: *snickers*

Aaaanyway, moving on. You get extra brownies for writing an ecchi Sasuke in the second drabble. And more brownies for writing SasuSaku sap in the last drabble!

*huggles Lars* You're the best! Now if only I can squeeze some SasuSaku haooy out from you! :lol: