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Scars will heal ?xR Porlogue

Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 2:58 pm
by stormwind16
Scars Will Heal

Ok so, I'm always a bit rusty in the beginning. :wink: Don't worry it'll get better!
Part 1 is in the making so let me know if you think I should continue. :salute:

A soft humming sound wakes me up from what seems like a very deep sleep.

<i>God, my head hurts!</i>

I try to reach my head with my hand, but find I?m too tired to even lift a finger. The humming sound now seems like voices. A deep male voice is talking to a female. The male voice sounds strangely familiar, and goosebumps appear on my arms.
I don?t like the guy?.at all.

I strain to open my eyes. A big flash of white light blinds me. I blink my eyes a few times till they are adjusted to the light.
All I see is white, white sealing, white curtains, and a white door. Must be a hospital.

A soft beeping sound comes from the heart monitor near my bed. I try to lift my arm once more. And I find myself successful this time, though every movement makes me ache.

The white door opens, and a male enters followed by a nurse.
?Well, I see you?re awake!? The nurse says cheerfully. ?How are you feeling??
?Like?? my voice is rough, and I clear my throat to continue. ?Like I was hit by a bus at full speed.? I try to lift myself, but a sharp pain stops me from going any further.
The man, who was still standing in the doorway, swiftly came to my aid. As soon as he touched my arm a name escaped my lips. ?Heero.?
The man stopped abruptly, and stared at me for a few seconds. Flashes of memories went through my mind. ?You?re Heero.? I said once more.
He gave me a nod, and continued to raise me. I hissed in pain.

?If you would be so kind to leave the room sir. I have to clean her.? The nurse said to Heero.
?It?s not like I haven?t seem anything before.? He said to her in a sharp and dangerous voice.
I touched Heero?s arm slightly. ?Go on Heero. I won?t run away.? I smiled slightly at him.
He, though reluctantly, turned and walked towards the door.

As soon as the door shut behind him, I found myself relieved. This did not go unnoticed by the nurse. But she said nothing and filled a bowl with nice warm water.
?How long have I been out?? I asked the nurse. She looked up and smiled slightly. ?Ow, about 3 days.? My eyes widened. ?That long? What happened??
?According to the man who brought you in, you fell from the stairs.? A hint of disbelieve rang in her voice. The nurse uncovered my legs and I took in a surprised breath.
My legs covered in large blue and purple bruises. I rolled up my sleeves and found more of these. ?If I were you,? the nurse said ?I would leave him.?

Somehow I felt like I did??.

Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 4:02 pm
by lilac310
I voted for Trowa and I like Trowa but please don't make Heero seem so evil and sadistic...Other than that, I think your story is quite interesting.

Posted: Wed Oct 20, 2004 12:26 pm
by Roa_Aoife
Quatre all the way!!!!!!! I think he and Relena are perfect for eachother. This seems really good, and is starting to take a dark feel to it. Keep going!

Posted: Thu Oct 21, 2004 9:15 pm
by Kanya Barton
GACK! Evilness out the frame on Heero's side...I can see that this will be a good one. I wish that I could have gotten the chance to vote, but since I didn't I'll just say it. I VOTE TROWA ALL THE WAY!!!
Peace out! :D

Posted: Sun May 22, 2005 4:33 pm
by Pure
ya heero shouldn't be abusive but i like trowa too. UPDATE SOON!

~Kat~

Posted: Wed Nov 02, 2005 9:55 am
by WaterGoddessX
I so say Trowa!!! I like the plot twist .. Heero evil .. this seems very interesting ... ^^ I like it so far ..

Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 10:02 pm
by Tobo Castit
I think this can be very interesting. We all know Heero isn't REALLY evil, but for the sake of the story it might be fun to see him that way. I didn't get to really vote, but I'd like to see Trowa or Wufei as the "knight in shining armor". Since Trowa seems to have won the poll I'll vote Wufei.