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Sunset (one-shot, 1xR)

Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 7:16 pm
by Eienvine
So, I got out of class at six-thirty, but couldn't go home because I had to be back on campus at seven-fifteen. So, with nothing else to do, I decided to see if I could write a fic and post it in just forty-five minutes. The final result: I've got two minutes to spare. Go team.

So, here it is. I prefaced it with that little story to explain why it's so short. It's kind of a ficlet. It's just a bit of mindless fluff, but I enjoy it. The sunset part reminds me of home. How nice.

Pairing: 1xR

Rating: G





Sunset




It was only seven in the evening, and already the day had been at least forty-eight hours long. She sat at her desk, squinting against the rays of the setting sun that always found their way into her window at this time of day. The office was thankfully silent, after a day of phone calls and meetings and arguments, but still there loomed on her desk untidy piles of paperwork, an unwelcome reminder that her workday was not over yet.


She dropped her head into her hands and began to massage her temples. Day after day of too little sleep had settled into a dull ache behind her eyes, but she was afraid that if she took any more pain pills for her head than she already did, she?d become an addict. With a sigh, she moved her hands to below her chin so she could open her eyes and look at the paper on her desk. Another document, another proposal, another agreement for her to sign. It never changed.


Not that she wanted anything to change. No change meant the world was still stable, that the peace she valued so dearly still surrounded them like a mother?s arms, comforting and protecting. That was worth everything in the world to her. That was worth the headaches she got from late nights and early mornings. That was worth her total dedication. She knew that. She just sometimes wished . . . what for, she wasn?t sure. Sometimes she just looked up at the sky and wished.


But wishing wouldn?t solve anything, and it certainly wouldn?t get this document read. With a resigned smile, she sat back to examine the document.


Then she stopped as a figure appeared in her doorway. It was her bodyguard, watching her through dark blue eyes half hidden behind a fall of dark hair. He hadn?t knocked, but then he never did, always seeming to know intuitively when she didn?t want to be disturbed. He seemed to know a lot of things about her intuitively. It was just one of the reasons he did such a wonderful job protecting her.


Setting the document down on the desk, she smiled tiredly at him. ?What is it?? she asked softly, and he motioned out the door with a nod of his head. ?There?s something you should see,? he intoned, and she stood, stretching, and followed him out.


They went to the elevators, but instead of going down to the main Preventers offices, like she?d expected, her bodyguard hit the button for the top floor. Her brow furrowed. ?Where are we going?? she asked, but he didn?t answer. She shrugged and stood by him in silence for the rest of the ride, content just to be near him. She loved him, still, as much as she had when she?d first followed him into the world of war and politics. He, on the other hand, had much more trouble with that emotion. But she knew that he cared for her, somehow, in some way, even if he didn?t show it, and that was enough for her. He was enough.

On the top floor, he led her out of the elevator and up a staircase that led them out onto the roof. Emerging into the fading sunlight, she squinted and looked at him in confusion. ?What are we doing up here?? she asked. He simply motioned to the edge of the roof. ?There?s something I wanted you to see.?

Still perplexed, she followed him to the edge, then stopped short, awed. The sun was halfway hidden beneath the blue mountains in the distance, and its slanting rays were scattering out across the evening sky. There were many clouds still in the sky from the morning?s rainstorm, and the sun?s rays were dying them in vibrant colors, filling the sky with brilliant pinks and purples and peaches. The vivid colors in the sky were reflected softly in the lake at the foot of the mountains. A soft breeze was blowing through the city, and she closed her eyes as it washed over her.


?I noticed you always face away from your window at sunset,? he said, interrupting her reverie, ?so I figured you haven?t seen this in a while.? She looked at him in bemusement, surprised he?d noticed. ?No,? she spoke softly, ?I haven?t. Thank you.?


They remained on the roof a few minutes longer, until the sun had completely set and the clouds had faded to a bruised blue. Then, with one accord, they turned silently away and walked back inside the building. In the same quiet contentment, they rode the elevator back to her floor, and he walked her to her office.


Smiling in quiet happiness, she turned back to him. ?Thank you,? she said again. ?I really needed that.? He didn?t smile back- he never did- but she?d known him long enough to interpret his expression ? contentment and affection and hope. ?You deserve it,? he said, reaching out to touch her face. Then he turned and disappeared into the hallway.


She watched him go, then smiled and returned to her desk.




FIN

Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 7:27 pm
by Lady Casper
Aww that was so descriptive of Relena and Heero's knowledge of each others minds.

Awesome Eienvine! :wink:

Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:10 pm
by melodrama
Gosh... that was really lovely Eienvine. I wish I could write something of that quality in such a short span of time for a start. But I really liked the way you captured both of their personalities in such a short piece. Not an easy feat.

You've also managed to encapsulate one of the main reasons I love the 1xR pairing so much. That subtle and underlying emotion that runs between them.

Thank you for sharing!!

Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 11:44 pm
by Andrea
Amazing how such short story can capture so much emotion. Do you know sometimes when you read something, anything, and you sigh as you read the last word... you feel like it was just what you needed...?

I really liked it, it was so sweet, and so close to 'reality' to make it perfect. I liked how you didn't force them, their personalities were as they should be: quiet, understanding, caring, and yet, very subtle.

Thanks for the good read, Eienvine, I really needed it.

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 12:04 am
by Morrighan
I can't say more than what's already been said.

Awesome, awesome job!

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 6:08 am
by RelenaFanel
Nice, very nice. I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks 'yay, I'll write between classes.' Of course, it would take me hours just to match the word count you managed to do in such a short time. So, as a question I think we'd all love to know the answer to, if you had run out of time, which would have taken priority? Relena and Heero or school obligations?

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 8:03 am
by Raspberry
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Wonderful :D It truly made my day! There's nothing better than fluff after stinking school :wink: :lol:

Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 5:08 pm
by J Alberghini
Pretty! Short and sweet. It's amazing that you could do that in such a short time. Nice work!

Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 5:13 pm
by Mellie
Awww! That was so cute! And perfect...a nice touch to the day...right around sunset....*melts* *_* It was so romantic!

Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 9:17 pm
by Eienvine
Oh, I'm so glad you all liked it! Maybe I ought to write all my stories in as little time as possible- I seem to get more reviews that way. :wink: Thank you all for reviewing!

P.S. RelenaFanel- since when have school obligations taken precedence over anything? And besides, when I'm at school, do you think I'm paying any attention? :wink: