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[[Reunion challenge]] No More Solitude (SasuSaku)

Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 6:11 am
by ethereal-moonrain
No More Solitude

By: ethereal-moonrain


I missed her more than I thought.

I didn’t go through the process like others. I didn’t cry that night. I didn’t say anything. I didn’t give her anything at all.


She’ll understand that for sure. She’s probably use to that now.


But frankly speaking, I’m not use to this, not use to this deep silence. It was quite ironic too being me, Uchiha Sasuke, not being use to silence. If she was use to my silence, I was use to her silliness.


I appreciate everybody’s help. And I know that I have to go on that process. “You have to visit her, you’ve got to cry too Sasuke-teme” as what Naruto would put it.


I realized it by now that even without those silly whims of my friends, I would probably ended up here anyway. You see, she has a way on doing things. She had a way on making me doing things I didn’t want to do or rather I didn’t know I could do.

I’ve been hearing voices lately, voices that were oh-so-familiar. Others might think I’m losing my sanity. There’s a big percent that they will think of me that way, off course to them losing someone special could make them insane.


But mine is different.

I walk silently on the large bulk of soil were a large stone was embedded.


Uchiha Sakura

--A flower bound to grow on everyone’s heart.--


Off course mine is different. Too different.


I look up in the sky, finally proving to the world that I was indeed not alone.


I see no solitude here. Right? Sakura?



--owari—




hey! I know its not good and that its probably late but I just made this in like ten minutes together with the typing and all. The idea was suppose to be place on my new sasusaku fic that I’m intending to make. But leaving this not-angsty.

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 2:19 am
by csmlee
Gah! You killed Sakura??? *gives you the evil eye* :evil:

Ethereal-moonrain: But I got them married!!!
Cheryl: Fine, fine. *grumbles*
You see, she has a way on doing things. She had a way on making me doing things I didn?t want to do or rather I didn?t know I could do.
I love the way you portray Sasuke's view of Sakura!

And the ending of Sasuke looking up at the sky and talking to Sakura... it's beautiful!!! I completely <3 it!!!

Great job! (Even though I'm still holding a small grudge against you for killing Sakura!!! :-P :-P :-P) And welcome to the forum! Looking forward to seeing more of your fics!!! :)

Posted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 5:17 am
by ethereal-moonrain
eeps! sowy??? ehehehehe... but look on the brighter side... they got married and sasuke did say he was different from many cause he knew sakura is still there... tee-hee... *bonks head to gain another excuse*

Posted: Thu Oct 07, 2004 11:07 pm
by Lauren
::tear:: SAKUUUUURA! WHY! But still, you get the mod love, for replying to the challenge. <3 Shpanks. AND WELCOME!