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(rewrote songfic) Bad Religion 2xR NC-17

Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 2:03 pm
by kmblue
Title: Bad Religion
Pairings: 2xR
Warnings: Angst lemon
Disclaimer: I'm just a poor, poor girl. Why would you want to sue me?
Notes: The first and only 2xR I ever wrote. Fic from 2001 but adjusted in 2004. I could make it into another songfic arc but at least not anytime soon.


Bad Religion by Godsmack


//can you feel i'm not like you anymore
i can't see, i can't breathe//


He hated her. He hated being a slave to her. She was the only one with control over him and he hated that fact. But she drew him to her, her body was like a pill, her voice was a mesmerizing, he couldn't win.

"Duo.", she whispered, her voice faint in the dark night, her blonde hair flowing behind her, her eyes shining as she looked up at him. He willed himself not to look at her, not to fall to her allure, but he was a lost man. Her innocent smile sucked him in, even though she was far from innocent. Relena whispered, "Duo, I know you want me, just give in."

Duo groaned inwardly as Relena's fingers first stroked his face and moved down into his shirt. He was a sucker for her.


//see you quiver like the dogs on the streets
looking down on as i beat you//


Duo growled as Relena's fingers moved down to the bulge in his pants. Even if he had to lose to his desire for her, he wouldn't let her know that she won, as he picked her up and carried her into the waiting room. Relena giggled, "Duo, this is the living room!?

Duo growled, "You played with fire. Now you get burned.", as his fingers moved down her blouse, managing to unbutton it completely before he ripped it off of her. Duo bent his head to her breast, suckling on them as he worked on unzipping and taking off her skirt. Relena retaliated, ripping his shirt off and taking off his pants, leaving both of them naked.

//it's bad religion, from a broken nation
it's a contradiction
and i can't take it anymore//


Relena ran her fingers down his chest, saying, "Hilde can't do this like me. She can't make you this crazy.", as Duo's lips ran down her belly, teasing at her center, but not going any farther. Relena moaned, as Duo's fingers started to play inside of her. Duo whispered in Relena's ear, "I bet Heero couldn't do this like I can.", as Relena screamed softly as Duo's fingers hit a sensitive spot.

//who's to say i won't like you anyway
take a deep breath, i'm alive
can you feel me, i'm alive inside of you
agony creeps up behind you..//.

Relena ran her things down his back, bringing him closer to her as Duo adjusted her to where she was sitting on his lap. Their lips met as Duo's hands brought her down on his shaft. Relena gasped as she adjusted to his hard length inside of her. His hands moved her off of him a bit, showing her the rhythm he liked. Relena rode him, her blonde hair cascading down her back as Duo's lips latched onto her right breast. Relena dug her nails into Duo's back as she felt herself come. Duo followed her soon after with a groan.

//it's a bad religion, from a broken nation
it's a contradiction
and i can't take it any fucking way!//

Duo adjusted his belt as he got ready to put his shirt on. Relena was already dressed and she looked like the perfect politician she was. She had a Bluetooth open and she sighed as she looked at the messages left for her. She said, "I've been missing for too long. Same time, next week."

Duo growled, "No fucking way, not anymore."

Relena smiled and chuckled. She replied, "I'm your addiction, you can't get enough of me. Just admit it."

She stood up and shook out her hair before saying, "Heero can't kill you anyway."

Duo just stood there and looked at her. He couldn't, he just couldn't betray the memory of his best friend that way.

//can you feel it? i gotta live with it everyday
i can't take the pressure, i'm going insane
now go away//

Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 2:30 pm
by Mellie
wow. that was...so different from other things I have read. The subtle hints within left me craving more. what happened to hilde? Heero? there are so many questions, and I would be thrilled if you continued someday

Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 8:32 pm
by Faye Faye
That was a good fic, but it still broke my heart. I'm still a very religiously devoted 1xR and 2xH fan...so while I enjoy lemons...it's still sort of weird imagining them with other partners...but I definitely like the fic...I'm with Mellie though, what DID happen to Hilde and Heero?

<3
Faye Faye

Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 6:00 pm
by Kanya Barton
Great fic! And I must agree...what did happen to Heero and Hilde???...
Peace out! :D

Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:54 pm
by lilac310
look up!!!...yup, way up...I agree with all the three of them....What happened to Heero and Hilde?....although I think there had been a subtle hint that Heero's dead, I still want to know the details...It'll be awesome to see you continue this.

Posted: Wed Oct 27, 2004 10:09 pm
by Nausica?

Awesome fic, blue, and great use of the song... but ouch... my baby Duo's in between a rock and a hard place. *pats Duo on the head*

He's kinda in a "can't live with her, can't live without her" situation, and it was kinda shocking to think that either Relena and him would act like that. But hey, that's what fanfiction's about, right? Explore the unknown. Dun dun dun...

:-? Ugh, I'm so lame...

* muah *


- Naus

Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2004 1:02 am
by Andrea
It's one thing you pair Duo and Relena, but you also kill Heero!?

*laugh*

That was... different. Short but hot.