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Life, Love and Peace 1/?

Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 8:02 am
by fire cat
This fic is a little on the depressing side. It is from Heero's point of view. I hope you enjoy, and make sure you review! :evil: Enjoy :D



What is the next turn in life that I will take? I will never know, for the future is hard to determine. My life is too hard for others to understand. I have no family, no friends, no home. Life is meaningless. Sometimes I feel like killing myself. No one can help me.Except HER. She doesn't see all the things that I have done. She doesn't care that I could Kill her at anytime I chose. All she does is talk to me in that beautiful voice of hers. She loves me for some reason that I don't know. I know she would cry if I killed myself . In a way I can't help but love her too. She is the only person who has ever treated me so kindly, as a normal human being. But I can't be with her. Her life would be in danger. I couldn't do that to her. She needs to be safe. As much as I want her, and need her I will stay away for her benefit. For the world needs her too. She keeps the peace between the earth and the colonies. For the rest of my life I will protect her form those that wish to destroy peace. For she is the symbol of peace. I won't let her get attached to me more than she already is.If anything I wish I could die to end my suffering. it is painful to be so close yet so far. But I will not, because she needs someone to protect her, and I alone am the only one able to . It is my mission to protect her form now on.

She stirred in her bed. She feels as if there is someone else in her room. Slowly she turned around and saw"Heero?"
He bolted out the windw without saying a word. He couldn't let her see him ever again.
"Heero!! Don't go! No! Come Back Heerooooooo!" Relena yelled as she ran to the opwn window. When she got to the window no one was there and she loked as hard as she could for the fleeing Heero. Eventually she went back to bed and cried herself to sleep.

THE END



NOW REVIEW I SAY REVIEW :evil: or no next chapter until i get more reviews

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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 8:58 am
by angel222
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: this is perfect it really is

Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 4:37 pm
by simmer
That was so sad...
Maybe he'll come to his senses and sweep her off her feet soon :wink:

Keep it up!
simmer

Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 6:49 am
by fire cat
hey, thanks for the replies. I have the next chapter ready to go but i wont put it up until i get more reviews. so tell people to review

Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 7:24 am
by APerfectSoldier87
Was a good fic, but u should post even if you don't get alot of reiviews. Alot of people don't like it when authors hold their fics hostage, it makes them not want to review, besides the second post of a fic usually gets more reviews. :-?

Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 2:27 pm
by KPGUNDAM
More must have more!!! :lol: :lol:

Please post the next chapter as soon as possible. :bounce: :bounce:

Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2004 3:02 pm
by Roa_Aoife
Not bad. The descriptions need a little work, and you should watch what tense you want to be in. Present tense adds an interesting flavor, but it can also come across as awkward. Over all though you have a good beginning.