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Close Call (2xR)

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 1:49 am
by Beck
This was created for gw500's challenge for "flattery".

Title: Close Call
Author: Beck
Pairing: 2xR
Rating: G
Warnings: None really. I always wanted to write a 2xR and I guess this was my chance to actually do so, yes, this is my first to write them.
Word Count: 539



The sounds of shuffled footsteps stopped as Duo turned to see the person who was beside him hunched over, her chest heaving with deep breaths. Knowing that he was watching her, she glanced up at him.

?How much farther to safety??

Pulling a tracking device out of the small bag, he estimated the distance. ?About another 3 miles give or take."

Relena couldn?t help but actually groan at their predicament as she held onto her arm; the attack had taken them by surprise. ?I?m really getting tired of the places I?m staying at getting blown up, especially while I?m inside them.? She sighed lazily. ?I?m getting too old for this stuff.?

Duo walked over to where she was, taking in her battered self. Her hair had come loose from her ponytail and was in disarray while soot streaks and dried blood marred parts of her face and neck. He knew he wasn?t in the best of shape either but he could deal with it and besides, he wasn?t trying to travel on a sprained knee and cut up arm. . .cut up arm? Damn, why hadn?t she said anything before?

Deciding that now was not the time to scold, he simply rummaged around in his pack. Pulling out some antiseptic and gauze, he began tending to her wound, all the while giving her a once over; sure she looked rough now, but her natural elegance still shined through. Feeling the need to lighten her mood, he tilted her chin forcing her to look up at him.

?Hey, if you?re old what?s that make me, grandma?? He winked at her, his tone and smile both ornery.

?That?s some flattery!?

Always loving her inner fire, he smiled even more. ?You?re beautiful when you?re angry.? It took her by surprise when he punctuated his statement with a gentle kiss to her forehead, his thumb swiping a bit of soot from her cheek.

Her eyes wide and mouth gaping, he took that chance of distraction to turn his back to her, crouching down a bit. He didn?t want to fully face her if she was going to yell at him.

?Get on.?

?What?? Then it hit her that he was offering to carry her on his back. ?I can?t do that, you?re injured yourself too you know.?

He shrugged it off. ?Not really, just tired, but I?m use to it and I?ll live, now get on.?

She huffed as she took him up on his offer and carefully placed her arms around his neck. ?First you tease me, now you?re ordering me around.?

?Who?s teasing? You are beautiful.? Duo lifted her like it was nothing to him to have her weighing him down. Then as she was about to question his comment, she felt a slight pat on her bottom.

She slapped his back lightly. ?Don?t dare say that was an accident.?

Duo conceded. ?Ya got me princess. Now, be a good girl and I?ll think about asking you out on a date.?

He was delightfully surprised to feel her mouth to his ear. ?Well, be a good boy and I?ll think about saying yes.?

?Sounds like a plan.? He retorted happily, his pace steady, though he felt as if he was walking on air.



End


:salute:

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 2:36 pm
by Wingnut
Like I said before, I'll let this one slide since it was only flirting going on here and nothing serious took place nor is likely to take place. Not once Heero gets wind of this, and it will not be long before he does.

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 11:24 pm
by wicked
Beck-sama, I still love this piece and think you did an excellent job with this pairing considering it's the first time you've ever written it. Again I applaud you and think you've done a wonderful job. Keep them plot bunnies working!!!

~Wicked

Posted: Sat Sep 11, 2004 6:37 pm
by lilac310
I just love the way Duo humoured Relena with his supposed "flattery".....they really have a great potential of becoming a really cute couple!!!....Great job!

Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2004 8:12 pm
by ice princess
I love alt. pairings, and while I don't see much of these two, I love them together just the same! Mindless flirting, but oh, so cute!!! Kinda reminds me of what Inuyasha and Kagome could be if they didn't have all of their baggage to deal with. Sorry if not every one on this post watches that show. Anyhoo, fab job, Beck! I loved it!

~ice princess

Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 9:11 pm
by Kanya Barton
Oh, that was a good one. I smiled throughout the whole flattery part. I simply love Duo and the way that he acts. He's just a great character all around. *sigh* If only...
Peace out! :D

Posted: Thu Sep 23, 2004 8:20 pm
by CultureShock87
aaaaaawwwww! this made my heart go ::pitta pitta:: !!!!!!!!
i loved it too much to be healthy! short and sweet, i need ot go brush before i get a cavity! just...just...thankyou!

Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:54 pm
by Nausica?

* slaps Beck on the back *

That was a great start, Beck! Cuteness abounds in this fic - Duo teasing, Relena being like a real girl and flirting back, and the piggy-back riding part? Sweeet. It just goes to show you that fics don't have to be long and wordy (though those are good too!) to get good feedback. Makes me wanna write again... * sigh *

Hope to see more of your work in the Alts.


* muah *


- Naus

Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2005 3:09 am
by alexxie
Quite short but good enough to start a good day!!! :wink: