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The worst evening

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 12:21 pm
by angel222
I'm so sorry Mellie I know I promised to w8 for you'e opinion but I saw u weren't on-line and I just couldn't w8 posting this, it's my first romantic fic.



?May I have this dance from you princess ??
?Yes you may sir?
Heero smirked as Relena bow deep and accepted his hand. And the music began to play.
As they entered the dancefloor everybody made place for them and they were in the middle of the floor.
?So Mr Yuy , why aren?t you on the preventersmeeting ? I hope it isn?t just to dance with me ??
?No, It?s to keep the old and creepy delegates away from you miss Yuy.?
Relena couldn?t press back her laugh and immediatley everybody in the room was staring at her .
She burried her face in her hands hidding the pink blush on her cheeks.
?Maybe we should go sit down for a moment Relena?

?Oh god that was awfull, they?re still staring at me.?
?Do you wanna dance with me ??
?No, you already embarrassed me enough for one evening Heero?

?Miss Peacecraft !? A young man came to Relena and heero?s table.
?Miss Peacecraft, could you come to my office tomorrow to discuss the new reformation plan??
Heere gave the man a deathglare
?ehm never mind miss peacecraft, have a pleasent evening? the young delegate immediatley left the table .
?Heero Yuy , why did you do that ?? Relena tried to sound angry but she just couldn?t forget the scared face of the young delegate and smiled.
?well ??
?He was flirting!?
?He wasn?t flirting he asked me to come to a meeting!?
?so that wasn?t a flirt-trick ??
?No, ofcourse not, he?s married!?
?oh?

?pff I?m glad we?re home?
?Why ? didn?t you had a good time ?? Heero took a piece of Vanillacake out of the fridge.
?First you show up at that reception uninvited and I had to stop the guards from kicking you out.
Then thanks to you?re joke everybody was staring at me and then you scare away that poor delegate .
And you spilled wine on Senator Conwells dress?
?Well ? Didn?t you have a good time??He sounded fuzzy with all that cake in his mouth.
Relena sighs and runs her hand trough her hand through her hair.
?Well didn?t you have a good time ??
?No, it was the worst evening ever?
?I can think of worser evenings?
?Like ??
?Well the schoolprom 195 ,x-mas eve 195, or x-mas eve 196 or??
?Okay okay, you made you?re point!?
?But what about??
?Oh shut up and kiss me?

Relena pulled a suprised Heero in a tight embrace and kissed him pasionatly while wrapping her leg around his.
He dropped his cake to the floor
After 30 seconds he finally managed to break out of her kiss .
?So is you?re evening getting better now ??
?not really?
?Hm I know something? He started to unzipp her dress slowly .
? And is it getting better ??
?Definiatly?
He tackled her down carefully and kicked of his shoes.
?And what do you think princess??He said while putting some cake in here mouth.
?Yuy take me to bed or lose me forever!?
?Mission accepted?

NEXT MORNING

?And ??
?yesterday evening was the best evening ever?

?Mission accomplished?


(AN the song they were dancing on was called to beauty, to elegance and to noble mindedness, the same song like in the series when Heero and Relena dance at the schoolprom :lol: )

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 12:32 pm
by Chibi-sitter
I know the song. I got it! :bounce: and a dozen others grom the series soundtrack.

That was mushy, and cute, and sweet and the dialogue was *purrrs* Excellent :salute:

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 12:37 pm
by angel222
glad you liked it :-D I've got the song on cd and the soundtracks from Gundam wing and songs from the group who sings the songs like just communication (two-mix) I LOVE THAT GROUP *_*

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 12:44 pm
by Chibi-sitter
:D 8) :razz: I luv TWO-MIX too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :bounce: *_* :bounce: *_*

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 12:52 pm
by angel222
yeah but you can't buy the cd's here :cry:

TWO-MIX RULEZZZZ

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 2:23 pm
by Mellie
yea! This was fun! It's okay about not waiting, very nicely done!

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 2:52 pm
by Raspberry
Cute :D

Ah, Heero always makes sure to make Relena happy :wink: :oops: :lol:

I liked this one :D Some errors, but nothing bad :wink:

Posted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 3:22 pm
by Wingnut
Raspberry wrote: I liked this one :D Some errors, but nothing bad :wink:
Same here, mostly grammaticial stuff and things like that.
Leave it to Heero's persuasive methods (ie. sans his and Relena's clothing) to turn something bad into something good for Relena