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Think Twice

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 10:46 am
by angel222
I still do not own GW or Think Twice (the song)I will when take over the world


Think Twice

?What?s wrong with you? why won?t you tell me what?s bothering you ??
?I?m fine why can?t you just leave me alone?
?Don?t lie, I can see somethings wrong!?
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Don't think I can't feel there's something wrong
You've been the sweetest part of my life so long

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The words are still running trough my head. Always fighting, like I can still hear the glasses breaking.
I don?t know what happened , maybe whe took the wrong trail.
I just don?t understand how everything could go wrong so badly. Does Heero still love me, please don?t tell me that it?s over.

Is this everything ? This cannot be it, there?s got to be more to love.
Love can?t suddely change in to hate or madness can it ?
What did we do wrong, I have everything, why do I still feel lonely.
Is this the end of the Relena-Heero dream ?
Sorry my Relena for working it all out on you.
For hating you for my own failier.
But what if you are not the one for me ?
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I look in your eyes, there's a distant light
And you and I know there'll be a storm tonight

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Relena was humming a soft song while lighting the soft creamcolored candles.
She had set the table using the silverwork and a beautyfull deep red table cloth with beautyfull white napkins and crystall glasses.
She had planned a perfect romantic evening for her and Heero, to make everything work out again.
It would start with a romantic dinner that she had prepared with Pagan.
Then she would ask him to dance on their favorite song .
And to end they would watch the stars, she had spread out a blancket on the grass in the backyard.

Yes , Tonight everything will get better!
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This is getting serious
Are you thinking 'bout you or us
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?I still have to work!?
?can?t you just take a short brake to eat, we haven?t had dinner together for about a week.!?
Relena?s voice sounded dasperate but he just couldn?t hear it
?I said I don?t have time, why don?t you listen when I say something?
?Ow you are always so selfish ?
?What are you saying?!?

Why are we fighting about so stupid little things? We didn?t fight about such things when we got married,
when there was still that special feeling between us
What happened ?Is it stil us or are we only shadows from our former selfs? Oh Heero, we have to stop this.
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Don't say what you're about to say
Look back before you leave my life

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Killing my pain by burying myself with work, I?m sorry for not spending time with you.
But it?s not working out.
Mayby whe should end it, maybe whe should have ended it long ago.
He got up from his seat and made his way towards her bedroom that they didn?t share anymore since
2 months.

?Relena, can I talk to you please ??
?why ?? Her voice sounds angry but also dissapointed and sad
?I made a descision??
He could her whisper ?no??
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Be sure before you close that door
Before you roll those dice
Baby think twice
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He enters the bedroom and I already know what he?ll say, please no.
I whisper no, but inside I?m screaming .
Please don?t speak, don?t say a word we can work it out.

?Relena, I?m? sorry for my behaviour lately?
?Heero , leave the room please, I need some time alone.?her soft voice sounded.
?Relena, this is important and you know it?
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Baby think twice for the sake of our love, for the memory
For the fire and the faith that was you and me

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?I?ve done some thinking Relena, maybe whe?whe should? his voice was shaking
?Heero, please don?t?
?Relena, I think it?s better if?if we shouldn?t see each other anymore?
?Don?t say such things, we will work it out?

She hugged him tight like she wouldn?t let him go, but he pushed her away.

?I?m sorry princess?
? No, Heero think of all the beautyfull memories , look at the pictures? She was screaming,
her face soaked with tears.?We belong together? her fist clenched against his chest.
?Stop Relena, I have to go? A single tear tried to escape his eyes but was stopped by The perfect soldiers emotionless mask.
?Farewell Relena? he whispered and left
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Baby I know it ain't easy when your soul cries out for a higher ground
'Coz when you're halfway up, you're always halfway down

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She was still laying on the bed where he left her .
Looking outside as the rain the rain was ticking against the window.

?It seems like the sky feels just as miserable as me.?

Her tears had soaked her pillow by now and strokes of hair that escaped her messy braid were now hanging in her face.
How could he just go, how could he just forget the memories.
When she turned on her other side her eye was caught on the emty spot on his nightstand.
He took the picture?
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But baby this is serious
Are you thinking ?bout you or us
Baby this is serious
Are you thinking 'bout you or us

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My sweet Relena, I?m so sorry. It?s all my fault that it didn?t work out.
I love you so much, if only I had told you that more often.

The picture was laying in front of him.
He smiled at the thaught of that moment, it was made at a party at Quatre?s place.
That was when he had proposed to her , when?he was truly happy.

?I gues true happyness never last forever?

He stepped on his bike and left?
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Don't say what you're about to say
Look back before you leave my life

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So this was it? This was the end?

?How could you do that Heero why? Do you still wan?t to kill me? Please do my a favour Heero come back and shoot a bullet true my heart ! Don?t let me die of a broken heart Dont leave me with hope.
Come back and kill me face to face coward !?

She droped herself back in the pillows, sweat dripped from her forehead .

?I love you, Heero? she whispered his name.
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Be sure before you close that door
Before you roll those dice

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One mistake another courtship died
One memory haunts a lifetime
Undying love
Lost forever

With those words Heero Left forever.
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Don't do what you're about to do
My everything depends on you
And whatever it takes, I'll sacrifice
Before you roll those dice
Baby think twice

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 11:42 am
by Mellie
this was good. There were some spelling mistakes, but the emotions behind the words were very evident. Maybe italisize your song next time. It runs together a bit. I got a little lost. But I really liked it. Good job, angel! :wink:

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 12:46 pm
by Elyn Yuy
Are you knew to BI? I saw that you only had 49 posts...

Welcome to the insane asylum...

WELCOME TO BI!! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Great song fic!!! Maybe one or two spelling mistakes...But some of them were probably Relena's emotional voice cracking :)

Keep it up, Angel222!!!

:salute: Elyn Yuy

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 1:20 pm
by angel222
1 yup I'm new

2 Sorry I'm Belgian so my English is not perfect thought it's better then the most Belgian kids of my age *caus I learned it by myself and not in school*

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 1:30 pm
by Raspberry
Why do you all people have to write such sad stories?! :cry:

Good job!

Posted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 1:58 pm
by angel222
I don't know but there are 2 kinda stories I can write, sad fics and silly fics so what I post here is always sad sorry