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Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2002 4:21 pm
by blackrose
Ok this is my first fic so plz be kind. plz r&r! I some what got the story line from a story my friend told me. Flames are welcome just plz don?t be TOO harsh.

Disclaimer: I don't own the Gundam Wing characters, or anything of the sort. But some of the characters are mine.


Stranger
Chapter one


?I can?t believe we are going to live here,? Relena?s eyes lit up with excitement, ?it?s so beautiful.? Heero watched, in amusement, his new wife walk around their first house and chuckled to himself.

Relena turned around to face him. ?What?s so funny?? Heero slid his arms around her waist.

?It?s just when you lived with your brother you had everything in the world and yet you?re still excited over this tiny house.?

?It?s not just any house; it?s our house,? Relena explained.

Heero smirked, ?Well why don?t we go look at our new bedroom.?

* * * * *

Relena was sitting on her bed talking to her brother on the vidscreen. She was shocked at what she just heard. ?So let me get this straight, if I don?t leave Heero and come back home Daddy?s going to disown me! Why is he doing this??

?He thinks it?s for the best. And so do I. You were naive and vulnerable when you met him. He could?ve easily won your heart by promising false love and commitment, and you, being you, would?ve easily fallen for it.?

?So now you?re insulting me,? resentment was evident in her voice.

?Don?t take it the wrong way, Relena. It?s just that? I know what men like him are after. They find a wealthy, beautiful young girl and convince her to run off with them.? Seeing Relena?s face he added, ?I just don?t want you to get hurt.?

Relena?s tone softened, ?Milliardo I?m fine. Really if all he was interested in was my money, then why would he marry me. Please try to understand that I?m happier now than I have ever been in my entire life.?

?Weren?t you happy living with us??

?Please don?t take it the wrong way. How should I say this, I was very young when mother passed away, may peace be upon her, and it was hard. When I was fifteen you got married to Noin and moved out. So I had not only lost a mother, but I also lost a brother. After you left father sent me to Saint Gabrielle?s Boarding School for Girls. So I never really had a life at home until I graduated, but by then I was eighteen. Please try to understand and be happy for me. I am in good health and I?m happily married.?

?Are you sure because I can come there and get you if HE does anything?

By now Relena was very irritated. ?Now stop that Milliardo! You know Heero wouldn?t do anything to me. Why do you dislike him so much?? Zechs stared at his sister.

?Relena it?s not that I dislike him. He was my partner on some special assignments, but it?s just that I though you would marry someone?? he paused ?better.?

Now Relena cut off the connection. ?Better! I can?t believe he said that! Better.? Relena sighed ? I better get ready if we are going to the neighbors for dinner.?

* * * * *

?Relena?s going to kill me? Heero promised Relena that he would be back before 5:00. The normally passive girl had warned him that if he was not home in time he would be in serious trouble; they had already reneged on three invitations by their neighbors due to his excessive overtime.

So engrossed in his thoughts he didn?t notice the person on a bicycle riding right in front of him. Heero slammed on the brakes narrowly avoiding hitting the person.

?What the hell do you think you are doing?? Heero shouted coldly.

The biker took off her helmet revealing a very attractive woman. ?Riding? she replied calmly.

?What if I hit you??

?So??

?What do you mean so?? he asked emotionlessly.

?So you would?ve gone to jail,? replied the biker coolly as she remounted her bike ?nice meeting you? then she rode off.

* * * * *
?Why that pasta was lovely Mrs. Anderson? Relena stated to the elderly women

?Oh please do call me Edith, Mrs. Yuy?

?Only if you call me Relena? All of the sudden there was this loud crash.

?What was that?? said Heero unfazed.

?Oh that was probably Edward, he?s as blind as a bat with out his glasses.? She picked up his glasses from the table. ?Excuse me I?ll be right back?

?Oh no that?s quite alright it?s getting late and we must be going?

?Alright, you can see yourselves to the door? I will see you later then.?

* * * * *

As Heero and Relena made their way across the dark cold street to their home, a figure in a dark room pulled the curtains open just wide enough to observe the couple. ?The perfect targets or should I say the perfect puppets? the figure stated to his companion with an evil sneer on his face.






Ok so what do you think? Please review criticism is good?but not too much. It gets much better I assure you. Remember that this is my first fic. Thanks Rose and kmf chan for helping me.

~Leena

Posted: Sat Aug 03, 2002 8:04 pm
by Dark Mistress
Oooooh very nice! Please continue, I know that the first few chapters are really hard, but you're off to a really good start!! Bravo!! :razz: Friends that help it along are one of the biggest blessings in a first story. I'll be on the lookout for the next (longer?)chapter!
(((LIZ)))