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Wufei's Embarrassment- GW 500 challenge

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 11:00 am
by stormwind16
Ok, so I LOVE this challenge! I suddenly felt inspired, which I haven't been in a LONG time now!
I was aiming for humor, but don't be suprised if it's not funny. :-P

I'm a bit rusty in my English, so don't mind the grammar errors. :wink:

Title: Wufei's Embarrassment
Author: Gaia/Stormwind16
Pairing: 1xR, 2xH the usual stuff
Rating: Absolutely no idea, all ages :-P
Warnings: Well, they are making fun of somebody....should I warn you about that as well? *_*

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He was so embarrassed.

He could not believe it.

Shaking his head again, Wufei opened his eyes once more. And looked straight into a mirror.
?Come on! It?s not so bad is it?? The older man who had just signed his own death warrant said. He just growled.
?Now aren?t you glad I brought you here honey?? The braided blonde girl asked him.
He looked at her, trying to imitate the Yuy death glare, unfortunately she was not very impressed.
?Wufei Chang, we will not take it out!? She said dangerously. And Wufei knew better than to object to that.

He was pulled into their car. He did not want to go, but as always he could not escape Sally wrath.
He crossed his arms and let Sally drive them to the Sanq Kingdom.
?Ow come on Wufei! Cheer up, your friends are not going to laugh!?
?Yeah right.? Was his mental reply.

They walked up the stairs of the Peacecraft-Yuy mansion and knocked on the door.
?Sally! Wufei! Come in you guys!? Relena smiled genuinely as she always did to friends.
They were led into the mansion?s great hall where all their friends were sitting around the fireplace.
Duo grinned when he walked in, he definitely already knew.

?Sow Wu-man, I heard you and Sally went to a specialist?? He said teasingly.
Wufei shook his head.
?Wufei, it's nothing to be embarrassed about!? Sally said.

At that point he did something out of pure habbit, but unfortunately for him, and lucky for Duo, he growled at Sally, baring his teeth like a tiger would to a threat or his prey.
This seemed to be his biggest mistaked he ever made in his entire life. And it was........

**some people in the room smirked**

**One particular person was flat out laughing at him**

He was now very irritated, no, wait I'm lying. He was furious! Especially at one braided baka.

?Hey Wufei!? that same braided idiot called between his laughter.

?Whathth?!? Called a now very sorry Wufei. "Like I didn't know they would laugh!"

Duo laughed even harder, the girls in the room giggled. Except one who could hide her smile behind her hand, she was after all a politician.

?Whathth awre you all lauphing aboutht?!? Wufei asked angrily.

Now even the politician and her husband could not stop the slight sputter that came from their lips.

?I?m going tho kill thatht orthodintssth.?

****And the room filled with laughter****


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sowww, what do you think? :D Let me know ok!

BTW 410 words!

Greets from Holland!

Stormwind16/Gaia

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:28 pm
by Raspberry
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

*Raspberry wipes the tears from her eyes* Well, all I can say that this is the best humor fic I've read for long time :lol: :lol: :lol: It's late here, and after reading this line
?I?m going tho kill thatht orthodintssth.?
I bursted into laughter that hard that my Mum shouted at me, cuz she was dozing off to sleep and I disturbed her :lol: :lol: :lol: And the best part is THAT I HAVE BRACES, too! :lol: :lol: :lol: Ah, poor Wufei, I remember my beginings with braces... *shivers* Anyway, great work, Stormwind! :lol: :lol: :lol:

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:32 pm
by bookworm
Braces... :x

Very nice, indeed.

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:56 pm
by Eienvine
That really was hilarious. You aimed for humor and you hit it. Great job.

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 4:19 pm
by Lady Casper
Lol ok that was very good. Poor wufie

i couldnt help but laugh myself :-P

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 5:16 pm
by stormwind16
ow! Thanks everybody! :oops: You guys make me blush!

Actually Raspberry, something simuluar happend to me when I first went into class when I had my braces. :roll:

Anyway, I feel inspired, so you'll probably read more from me soon *_*

Greets from Holland!

Gaia

Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 11:01 pm
by Beck
The sad thing is, I could so pic Wufei's expression. This was too cute, I couldn't stop giggling over it. I'll be sure to post it to the community. Thanx for participating!

Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:57 am
by Calla Lily
:D Oh dear... braces.... to get them or not, that is the question.
But great story! I too could imagine WuFei's expression and it got me all giddy. (Poor guy) I look forward to more stories from you.

~Calla.

Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 4:03 am
by Beck
I thought I'd just give you the link that someone commented on at the GW 500 place:

http://www.livejournal.com/community/gw500/56262.html

Posted: Tue Jun 22, 2004 9:26 pm
by Gundam Girl
*cackles* Sucks to be Wufei!