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Chibi Trouble
Posted: Mon May 03, 2004 9:55 pm
by bookworm
Yes, another of my humor fics. Actually, this is really not a short one, but maybe much longer than usual. Also, I'll post new parts here, and not post new topics. I don't know how long this will be, but I do hope that you'll enjoy it. I was imagining this before I sleep. I got some events planned out, and hopefully I'll make it as humorous as I can. I'll post the parts separately, but the posts where I type my comments will have snatches of the next part to come.
This fic will be rated like Crossword Puzzle. I think that later parts will have that risque remarks that I had in CP. But I'm typing the fic along while I'm at the cpu, so I only have a general idea of what is going to happen next...meaning that I go with the flow. Now and then, I might not have a part ready and I'll probably be writing another fic...but don't worry! This fic is already planned; I know the basic structure of the ending, and some general events of the fics. There might be some instances where I'll find inspiration from you. If a part does contain those, I'll comment about it beforehand.
I think I said enough for now. Anyway, I'll be typing away now. But before I do, I'll leave you the first four sentences of my fic. Here it is:
The Preventer headquarters is a group of massive buildings with various factions. One building housed a laboratory, where?
CRASH!!!
?WORM!?
Stay tuned for the actual beginning of Chibi Trouble.
Posted: Tue May 04, 2004 5:08 am
by Raspberry
Posted: Tue May 04, 2004 6:01 am
by Chibi-sitter
Posted: Tue May 11, 2004 10:40 pm
by bookworm
Here it is: the beginning of Chibi Trouble.
CHIBI TROUBLE 1/?
by: bookworm
The Preventer headquarters is a group of massive buildings with various factions. One building housed a laboratory, where?
CRASH!!!
?WORM!?
Heads turned as the chief Preventer scientist strode down the hallway.
?Worm, where are you??
A shuffle of feet and a young woman stuck her head out of a room.
?Yes, sir??
The scientist stopped a few feet away, hands on his hips, and glaring at his assistant.
?Where are the chocolates, Worm??
The young woman flushed.
?Um??
?Worm!?
The young woman stared at the floor.
?Well, I gave them to the Preventer 5.?
The scientist stared at his assistant in disbelief.
?Do you know what the chocolates are for, Worm??
A pause, and then a silent ?No? came from the woman.
The scientist shook his head. Then he turned and strode down the hallway. The young woman, fearing her employer?s scolding, followed to make sure that everything was all right.
The two walked out of the building and crossed the pavement towards another building. Opening the door, the two walked down the hallway towards the meeting room for the sole use of the Preventer 5.
The door to the meeting room was open, and the two went in?and stopped.
?We?re too late.?
Four of the Preventer 5 was staring at a bundle of clothes?where a cute, grinning baby stared up at them. The four turned to face the newcomers, their expressions varying from irritation to surprise.
The scientist strode to examine the baby, his assistant following meekly along. He kneeled down in front of the baby. The baby put his hands on the clothes around him and tried to go to the scientist. The scientist put his hands underneath the baby?s arms and lifted him out of the clothes. His assistant blushed as she beheld the naked baby, who was waving his arms and legs, thinking that it was a game; the young woman, who was acquainted with the baby when he was?older, thought that it wasn?t right looking at the person even though he was a child, being that the lower part of his body was not something that she should see?especially if the baby suddenly returned back to his older self and?well, let?s just leave it at that.
The scientist gave a deep sigh.
?Worm, you really did it.?
The young woman squirmed in embarrassment.
?I?m sorry, sir.?
One of the four men, a blond Arab, finally intervened.
?Miss Book, can you tell us what happened to our comrade??
The young woman flushed.
?I?m sorry. I really didn?t--?
She was cut off by the scientist, who had decided to answer the question.
?All five of you ate the chocolates she handed out, right??
All five gave affirmative answers?well, one of them just acted like a baby.
?Thank goodness that I only made five chocolates.?
The scientist gave a pointed look at his assistant?who promptly flushed again.
?What?s in the chocolate, Mr. Harem??
The scientist looked at the baby again.
?I made the chocolates for the specific reason of proving the phrase ?Chocolate Makes You Look Young? true. The chocolates that you?ve eaten were just the first batch and hadn?t been tested yet.?
The scientist looked up.
?So that means that the effects from the chocolates are unknown territory.?
The group, with the exception of the woman, looked at the baby again?
?who promptly grinned and farted.
The group sweatdropped.
The scientist shook his head.
?Oh, boy.?
~*~
TBC...
Posted: Tue May 11, 2004 11:03 pm
by Morrighan
Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 4:28 am
by White Witch
Posted: Wed May 12, 2004 6:57 am
by Raspberry
Posted: Mon May 17, 2004 7:06 pm
by bookworm
I was just reading some snippets for future parts. I'm telling you, my imagination is a riot. I couldn't believe how my imagination AND of course my muse, gave me. Sheesh.
Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 7:07 pm
by Chibi-sitter

I'm so sorry I forgot about this *smacks head onto desk*

yeow...
OK, I Want MORE coz
CHIBIS are
CUTE & this story is
CUTE so please MORE
CUTENESS! 
Posted: Sat Jun 05, 2004 12:29 pm
by Wingnut
Oh boy, dare I ask what effects the other 4 pieces are supposed to do?
Only Duo seems to be effected so far, so why not the others?