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Give!

Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2004 11:32 pm
by Lady Casper
?GIVE!?


Hey guys sorry I haven?t gotten my other chapters out yet but I?m working on them so to have some fun I wrote this one. Tell me what you guys think.



?Relena what do you have??

?Nothing.?

?No you have something. What do you have??

?It?s nothing.? Relena started to get defensive.
Now he knew she had something.

?Relena!?

?Yes??

?Give!?

?Give what??

?What you have!?

?I don?t know what you?re talking about.?

?Yeah you do. Tell me what you have!?

?No!?

?Yes!?

?No!?

?Yes!?

?No!? Relena stuck her tongue out at him.

?Relena Dorlain tell me what you have behind your back! NOW!?

?Oh brother, it?s just a tampon.? Relena waved it in his face.

?Happy now?? She asked with a smirk on her face.

?Peachy.? Heero replied.


Ok I know it would have been better if I worked harder on it but when you have screaming little kids in your ears you kinda can?t work on it as best as you would want it. Siblings! Ugh!

Catcha later! 8)

Chow!
8) [/b]

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2004 7:48 am
by Raspberry
Wow! That was so funny! Yeah, siblings! But I have older brother... and I had similar situation :lol: Great! Really wonderful! Good job Lady!

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2004 4:38 pm
by Calla Lily
:roll: *laughs* Silly Millie... [eek, I think I should hang myself for that horrid rhyme.] But that was funny. Put this up in the Silly Shorts forum and I urge you to continue writing! Really liked this one, even if Heero's sudden appearance was a tad odd.

"Peachy?"

Indeed. :eek:

Posted: Sun Mar 14, 2004 10:02 pm
by HeerosChick1842
funny! very funny! and cute too! :salute:

Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 11:39 am
by cherryflavored1R
Wow... you know, I usually don't think these type things are funny at all.... So why am I laughing? Mostly because this was actually done in a way that was actually funny.

So good job.

-Cherry

Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 8:04 pm
by bookworm
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Yeah, this should be in the Silly Shorts forum. But it is sooooooooo cute!

Posted: Tue Mar 16, 2004 12:08 pm
by Akasha
This so cute.
:wink:

Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2004 7:12 pm
by Lady Casper
Yea it was sort of a wierd thing when your watching ur younger siblings. I dont nowhere it came from. But I thought it was cute.

well hoped everyone thought so too! 8)

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 12:34 pm
by Raspberry
Oh yes! It was REALLY cute :wink:

Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2004 6:52 pm
by Lady Casper
Thanks for the complement Rasberry. Why don't try one of these short ones. Take where I left off if you want 8)

come you can do it!! 8)