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To Never Have (Drabble #12)

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 8:09 pm
by SimplyTurquoise
Disclaimer: I do not own the characters--- I only lay claim to the idea that put these words in this organization.

Title: To Never Have
Word Count: 120
Rating: PG
Pairings: Heero/Relena/Treize (triangle--- don?t you love shapes?)

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How was it that one envied what they already possess?

He had watched patiently, longingly until the day came when he was able to capture what for years he had worshipped.

And yet the envious feeling of want and pleasure from his treasure did not cease--- was never quenched.

Why? A question he asked himself everyday and night--- a question he already knew the answer to.

Despite everything--- the ring, the oath, and the knowledge that she eternally was his--- he knew without a doubt that she would never truly give him what he wanted most of all.

Love.

She couldn?t love him--- and she never would.

Because Relena loved Heero--- and everyday, the thought haunted Treize more and more

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Authors Note: I noticed a pattern as of late, all my little drabbles that are without humor--- usually involve a very absent Heero. Shame on him for abadoning Relena all these times--- therefore you much not lay blame onto this author, but to Heero who possesses a talent to be absent.

^_^

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 9:08 pm
by Andrea
Wow, different. Nice twist. But I liked it. :D

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 9:47 pm
by Shooting Gundam Star
:eek: WOW! In a way I feel sorry for Treize. But very good

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 9:50 pm
by Morrighan
Ooh... That was good!! I was wondering how that would work. Now I have my answer!!

Great job!!

Posted: Sat Dec 06, 2003 11:29 pm
by miaka mouse
ooh good one! i didn't figure it out til those last few sentences... and how fitting for the challenge! i bet if u look up envy in the dictionary it's wanting something u can't have... great stuff!

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2003 3:01 pm
by Wingnut
The real reason Treize gave Epyon to Heero. So that he would go out and get himself killed in some battle.
I dissagree with this concept. Treize was hooked on Lady Une and vice wersa.

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2003 3:21 pm
by Kari
Yay for Heero. :bounce: :bounce:

Posted: Sun Dec 07, 2003 6:17 pm
by bookworm
Great twist! Definitely up to the challenge.