Poem: Have to Do More to heal
Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2003 11:37 pm
Blah! Nother poem, 1xr based bit. I suppose it could stand as being original, but I wrote with our favorite little couple in mind.
Disclaimer: I don?t own Gundam or any characters, not that any names are mentioned, but whatever. I do however own everything else. It?s all mine title, words an what not. Who knows maybe I?ll own you someday?
AN: Word to the wise: I just finished my tenth Dr. Pepper for the day. My nifty little pyramid of cans is growing.
Have to Do More to Heal
by: Illiterate Ren
She never thought it?d end here
Never thought they?d lose it
No time is spent
All lost here with bloodshed
It killing her inside
Would he help her
Would he know how
To heal the wound opened
Dying
Tearing at her heart
Blood and pain
He?d have to do more
To heal her wounds
Another death
People once love
It tears at her
The garden dies
Now she?s losing her mind
She?s falling
Can you catch her
Would you help her
There?s things unknown
But you could try
To find?
Dying
Tearing at her heart
Dying
You?d have to do more
To heal her wounds
AN: Yah I know it?s a little angsty, but it?s late and the medication isn?t working as well as it used to.
I would however like very much to read your reactions. Criticism is always welcome, who knows maybe one of you will convince my delusional self that I really can?t write?
Bye bye for now unless ofcours I put on a good CD and my creative juices start flowin' one again. But for now I'l listen to the local radio station play that Lincoln Park song again for the third time in the past four hours.
Disclaimer: I don?t own Gundam or any characters, not that any names are mentioned, but whatever. I do however own everything else. It?s all mine title, words an what not. Who knows maybe I?ll own you someday?
AN: Word to the wise: I just finished my tenth Dr. Pepper for the day. My nifty little pyramid of cans is growing.
Have to Do More to Heal
by: Illiterate Ren
She never thought it?d end here
Never thought they?d lose it
No time is spent
All lost here with bloodshed
It killing her inside
Would he help her
Would he know how
To heal the wound opened
Dying
Tearing at her heart
Blood and pain
He?d have to do more
To heal her wounds
Another death
People once love
It tears at her
The garden dies
Now she?s losing her mind
She?s falling
Can you catch her
Would you help her
There?s things unknown
But you could try
To find?
Dying
Tearing at her heart
Dying
You?d have to do more
To heal her wounds
AN: Yah I know it?s a little angsty, but it?s late and the medication isn?t working as well as it used to.
I would however like very much to read your reactions. Criticism is always welcome, who knows maybe one of you will convince my delusional self that I really can?t write?Bye bye for now unless ofcours I put on a good CD and my creative juices start flowin' one again. But for now I'l listen to the local radio station play that Lincoln Park song again for the third time in the past four hours.
I look forward to more poetry!