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Walk Aways (Poem)

Posted: Mon Oct 13, 2003 9:52 pm
by raine_yuy
<center><font face="fine hand"><font color=red><font size=3><b>Walk Aways</b>



it seems we're all just strangers
stuck in the same space
brushing up against eachother
running around a maze

and we leave eachother hanging
on to their own lonely ropes
don't bother none about calling
don't bother none with hopes

yeah you and me
and me and you
what are we, really?
what are we to you?

walk aways
aren't we all
just the
walk aways

leaving when it pleases you
dragging around your story
doing what you have to do
stalking after that glory

dying when it pleases you
only breathing when necessary
doing what you have to do
to defeat that old adversary

walk aways
aren't we all
just the
walk aways

leaving behind stains of blood
for someone else to slip on
falling tears and crimson flood
we all build lies to dream on

walk aways
freedom is just beyond that door
walk aways
there's nothing more to live for
don't we all
just let if fall?

and walk away?





a dedication to the bebop crew...

Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2003 1:37 pm
by elyra-chan
Wow! Great poem. It was so deep and thoughtful. I worship the Spike and Faye coupling, too! :D I took the quiz, and I got Adieu. Huh. Cool! :D

Posted: Sat Oct 18, 2003 7:15 am
by Gundam Girl
Everybody here is so Spike/Faye, which I do not mind 'cause it's fun to read, but where are all the Spike/Julia's?

Good poem, too, Raine. It felt like Spike, Faye, Vicious, and Julia were sharing the same emotional thought.

Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 12:36 am
by Arucard
Wow..ok im impressed..defenently a beautiful poem indeed 8)

Posted: Fri Dec 05, 2003 4:56 am
by Rose of Betrayal
Whew... You made me think right then and there. I luv poems, yours is especially nice. :salute:


<img src="http://images.quizilla.com/R/Ruri-chan/ ... _Ahope.JPG" border="0" alt="You represent... hope."><br>You represent... hope.

Hope is something that sparks life in you...be careful to keep it alive.

Posted: Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:37 am
by silent muse
Wow.