Heero's Proposal [R]
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Heero's Proposal [R]
After a few years of merely being near one another following the war, their relationship is about to change... [one-shot. Complete]
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Good stuff. Very real and very in character. It was great, I loved it, It was my third time reading it. I just can't stay away. The medications working great. I need to write a song. I need to turn the radio back on. I need to get out of bed cause my roomates gonna bitch.
I want to go climb but the wall isn't open yet, guess instead I'll have to listen, cause Pink Floyed is the bomb, it's so good to listen to while reading Zaps old fics.
I want to go climb but the wall isn't open yet, guess instead I'll have to listen, cause Pink Floyed is the bomb, it's so good to listen to while reading Zaps old fics.
I choose to live.
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...shh...don't tell anybody...
That was -- by far -- the best proposal fic I have ever read. EVER. EEEEEEVEEEER!
I am in awe. I bow at the feet of the mighty zapenstap. I honestly could feel Relena's champagne joy at the end...
Bee-yuu-tiful!
--TQ
That was -- by far -- the best proposal fic I have ever read. EVER. EEEEEEVEEEER!
I am in awe. I bow at the feet of the mighty zapenstap. I honestly could feel Relena's champagne joy at the end...
Bee-yuu-tiful!
--TQ"In the clearing stands a Boxer,
And a fighter by his trade,
And he carries the reminders
Of every glove that laid him low
Or cut him 'till he cried out
In his anger and his shame;
I am leaving, I am leaving,
But the fighter still remains."
"The Boxer," Simon & Garfunkel
And a fighter by his trade,
And he carries the reminders
Of every glove that laid him low
Or cut him 'till he cried out
In his anger and his shame;
I am leaving, I am leaving,
But the fighter still remains."
"The Boxer," Simon & Garfunkel
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I completely and utterly adored this... I even got misty-eyed. I'm new to this site, Zapenstap, but I have read your work before on fanfiction.net, where I write under the pen name Airurando (in fact, I think I read this story years ago, but I love reading it over and over). You are unquestionably an excellent writer... and you give those of us who adore happy Heero and Relena endings a reason to hope. Well done! 
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Ayame Tenchi
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Dear Zapenstap,
You must be wondering what I'm doing sending you an e-mail regarding two of your stories which you have written three years ago. Simply put, I have discovered hidden riches just by going through your posts, starting from the earliest ones. I just had to sate my curiousity regarding your earlier writing style. Your stories are so complex that I couldn't help but wonder what kind of person would concoct such diabolical schemes. And I mean that in a good way. Hi, Mizaya, compliments go your way, too.
I couldn't help but utter a "wow" after reading the Elevator Scenario. You certainly did a hell of a job picking apart their personalities and injecting the morass into a plot, or vice versa and making it into an impressive story. Another thing I appreciate about the story is the characters' sense of emotional maturity or as mature as anyone can get when handling that type of situation. You've portrayed both characters in a different light and I could count one other author who does the same. I am without a doubt, very fortunate to have found two remarkable fanfic writers of gundam wing.
Nary a word passed my lips after reading Heero's Proposal...because I was floored by the over all brilliance of it that it left me...dumb founded. I have never encountered Heero and Relena portrayed that way. I wish I could be that way in that age. You made it appear so simple, yet the story itself is understated in its elegance. You did magic on this one. I won't forget it, ever. How did you do it? You practically delved into their psyche and brought their sould out into the open. And in doing so, you brought yours into the story itself. If I were a man, I'd be halfway in love with you right now and scouring the web for any information about you. Alas, that I am not. I'm just a simple gal whose sole passsion is a love pf books and fanfics that half of the time, the only reason I log onto the net is not to check my e-mails but to read. Sadly, these days, I neither have the time nor the luxury to do so. Work has a tendency of monopolizing one's time. Thank heavens the times I do get to go online, I find stories equal to priceless gems.
Thank you for writing such beautiful stories. Please, never stop. By now I hope you realize that you make people happy by posting your stories on the internet.
Avid fan,
Ayame Tenchi
You must be wondering what I'm doing sending you an e-mail regarding two of your stories which you have written three years ago. Simply put, I have discovered hidden riches just by going through your posts, starting from the earliest ones. I just had to sate my curiousity regarding your earlier writing style. Your stories are so complex that I couldn't help but wonder what kind of person would concoct such diabolical schemes. And I mean that in a good way. Hi, Mizaya, compliments go your way, too.
I couldn't help but utter a "wow" after reading the Elevator Scenario. You certainly did a hell of a job picking apart their personalities and injecting the morass into a plot, or vice versa and making it into an impressive story. Another thing I appreciate about the story is the characters' sense of emotional maturity or as mature as anyone can get when handling that type of situation. You've portrayed both characters in a different light and I could count one other author who does the same. I am without a doubt, very fortunate to have found two remarkable fanfic writers of gundam wing.
Nary a word passed my lips after reading Heero's Proposal...because I was floored by the over all brilliance of it that it left me...dumb founded. I have never encountered Heero and Relena portrayed that way. I wish I could be that way in that age. You made it appear so simple, yet the story itself is understated in its elegance. You did magic on this one. I won't forget it, ever. How did you do it? You practically delved into their psyche and brought their sould out into the open. And in doing so, you brought yours into the story itself. If I were a man, I'd be halfway in love with you right now and scouring the web for any information about you. Alas, that I am not. I'm just a simple gal whose sole passsion is a love pf books and fanfics that half of the time, the only reason I log onto the net is not to check my e-mails but to read. Sadly, these days, I neither have the time nor the luxury to do so. Work has a tendency of monopolizing one's time. Thank heavens the times I do get to go online, I find stories equal to priceless gems.
Thank you for writing such beautiful stories. Please, never stop. By now I hope you realize that you make people happy by posting your stories on the internet.
Avid fan,
Ayame Tenchi