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Parched (drabble #9)

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 4:48 pm
by miaka mouse
i'm still waiting on that lemony goodness... and since most of the replies so far have been comedy-based i thought i'd go for full out WAFF... with a tinge of lime...

Parched
1xR
word count: 118 (i tried, i really did)

It was like watching rhinestones scattering on silk.

They kissed her brow, smoothed a path down her flushed cheek and glossed her lips playfully. The tip of her pink tongue darted out to taste the wetness on her lips. The trail continued down her chin, along the column of her pale throat, where it trembled slightly at her pulse. It gathered at her collarbone, dipping between her breasts, gliding downward.

Suddenly, a warm mouth covered the water droplets that had been flowing down Relena?s body as she showered. An agile tongue licked at her moist skin, trying to quench its thirst.

And it seemed that this was not enough nourishment, for Heero?s mouth rose to meet her own, to drink his fill there.


(take that raine!!! i'll get u my pretty!! and ur little minions too!)

<?__)~

www.livejournal.com/~miakamouse

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 6:11 pm
by elyra-chan
Very nice! I like it! Wonderfully written, as usual. Hopefully you'll answer mt challenge? Please? Nobody has. :cry: Anyway, great story!

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 6:16 pm
by Miroku
waffy-

maybe too waffy.

nah.

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 9:21 pm
by bookworm
:oops: :oops: :oops:

Definitely good. And I like it. :salute:

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 10:08 pm
by Morrighan
Ooh.... He-he-he.... Heero might be getting some, ne??? :D

Great job!!!

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 10:08 pm
by WhiteWindRRose
hee hee.
wonderful counter attack Miaka!
nothing like Grade A Vitamin C.
:D

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 10:21 pm
by AngelOfDeath
I <3 lime touched goodness!

You win!

:)

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 1:38 am
by raine_yuy
Gah! I just can't resist limes. Specially when written by you. So this is your counter attack against my evil force, huh? Lol. Nicely done. I just love your drabbles!

And you'll do as my partner in crime in terms of dealing out the challenges. Woot! I have a partner in crime. Though one that actually embraces fluff 8)

Well done, Miaka. As always.

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 3:31 am
by Beck
Nice description, lovely brain candy indeed. Gives me that overall tingly feeling :D

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 3:48 pm
by J Alberghini
You write so pretty! That was the only word I could think of to describe it. You can see who needs to work on her description. Sigh. Good drabble.