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Drip. Drip. Drip (Drabble #9)

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 3:03 am
by raine_yuy
<b>Disclaimer:</b> If i owned GW, people would come after me with torches. I tend to torture the cast. Har. But i don't so...keep those torches away from me.He.

<b>Note:</b> Mwuahahahahahahahah! Oh man, evil is back in business. That fluff tranquilizer doesn't last long, does it? HarHarHar! Oh, i just love being the villain. I dare you to proceed from here...Hehe.

<b>Title:</b> Drip.Drip. Drip.
<b>Pairing:</b> Uhhh...Guess! Har.
<b>Raiting:</b> PG 13
<b>Word Count:</b> I cheated! Harhar. It's more than the limit.





Water dripped steadily in tune with a heartbeat.

Wet blonde hair. Pale grey skin. Blue lips.

Moisture trailing down closed lids, denying him the satisfaction of seeing her pain.

A figure watched over her, crying cold tears. One thought alone pounded inside his head like a maniacal mantra as the cold blade bled crimson.

When he had forced the knife against flesh and muscle to the heart beneath, she had left a parting gift for him, the sound of HIS name on her lips.

Green shadowed with sorrow. Even in the throes of death, Relena thought only of another. He had known that killing her heart was the only way to stop her from loving. If he could not have her, neither could Heero. He turned the tap on the shower and watched as clear liquid drained crimson down the drain.





Raine: *doing her evil victory dance* Mwuahahahaha! I love being me!

Miaka: :roll: And...there she goes.

Rose: :-?

MBF: :pale: Uh oh...we ran out of fluff tranquilizers. RUN!!!

Raine: :-P

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 10:52 am
by J Alberghini
Oh dear. Please don't tell me that was Trowa. I think I'm going to be scared for life. Why must you be so good at angst? Depressing is one thing, but this...It's really frightening. :eek: You write wonderfully, but it's kinda unnerving how one person can be so cruel to this poor characters. Haven't they suffered enough?
MBF: Uh oh...we ran out of fluff tranquilizers. RUN!!!
I think we need to try something new with her, heart candies,
love potion #9, The Bridges of Madison County. Actually, maybe not, that doesn't have a very happy ending either. A Barney marathon, perhaps? That might work. ::sings:: "I love you, you love me, we need to get her to write fluffy..."

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 11:55 am
by elyra-chan
That was good, but angsty as always. I still loved it, even if it was sad. You truly are the Queen of Angst. You are also one of the few angst writer's I will actually read and enjoy. Good job! :D :wink: By the way, I tool that quiz thingy, and I'm Hope. Interesting. I wasn't expecting that. Toodles! :salute:

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 1:03 pm
by paxbanana
Wow.... That's all I have to say. And, you know, raine, i really don't like blood. :pale:

Good job at the angst!

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 2:50 pm
by bookworm
Whoa. When I read it again, I immediately thought of Trowa.

*silence*

Is it Trowa?

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 3:02 pm
by criminal wreckchords
muahahaha. that was great. wonderful concept and nicely executed.

::covertly hands raine anti-venom for fluff tranquilizers::

Posted: Sun Oct 05, 2003 10:25 pm
by Morrighan
O.o ANGST!!!! Raine....I thought you were being experimented on!! What happened to the drug-induced fluff????

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 1:28 am
by AngelOfDeath
::twitch twitch::

GAH.... must.... write.... fluff....

Great job by the way. You're stuff is always so well executed. :)

Posted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 8:25 pm
by Eienvine
Absolutely and utterly depressing, but so well written! I am amazed at everything you can capture in a mere slightly-more-than-120-words. Too bad you use your powers for EVIL! Just kidding. It was depressing, but really beautifully done. That said, I'm going to curl up under my desk and cry.

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2003 3:36 am
by Beck
AHHH!!!! *covers eyes* Me can't read it, I know its going to be angsty. Can't handle it right now, too much going on for me personally.

I'm sure you meant it well :wink: